I'm pretty disappointed. I first read this because it looked cool, nice and the story seemed interesting. Now it just feel boring, with forgettable characters.
The uke's cuteness is too extreme, and even if it was funny at first, I think the author shouldn't have made the story go in this way, like, the progression only is cuteness, and the boys are in competition to get uke's attention. That's tasteless...
I though that "tied up in twins" was pretty boring, and the characters clichés 'cause it was the author's first comic, and that (s)he didn't really know how to make a character original, but now for me it's confirmed: the author's too lazy to think about originality, and perhaps only wants to make sure that people will read her/his work.
I think author could have taken another way, try new things,... Maybe a story with less clichés could have attired less reader, but it would has been a nice try. S/he could has, hum... I dunno, something about the characters going to school and having trouble, I dunno, but something funnier could has been easy to find. It looks like the author wants to write a funny and easy to read, but there are tons of other stories that are better than this, with funnier characters and taster humor (like 19 days) .
I'm gonna let this to the readers who just are beginning to read shounen ai and Yaoi. I think it suits only for those who aren't bored yet to read stories based on clichés and tasteless characters.
I'm sorry for the author who has a really good drawing style, at least, and for the uploader who probably took a lot of time to upload that.
Have a nice day, everyone. With lot of Good Yaoi.
Hey, it's fine to not enjoy the story because it's not your style but to call the author LAZY is ridiculous. Most people reading this are people who enjoyed Tied up in Twins, it clearly portrayed the authors style of BL which is fluff and light drama, it's supposed to be a fluffy but fun read, that is not the same as someone being lazy, that's honestly very rude and unnecessary.
Your entire comment is talking about wanting something more ''unique'', when anyone in writing and art knows that being ''unique'' is close to impossible at this point, and the meaning of ''unique'' differs per person. Some people think gore is unique whilst others think drawing a fairy thats gay is unique, either way uniqueness has nothing to do with the quality of a story, many stories are just the same stories made over and over again yet people still enjoy them, just look at Disney?
Your idea of the characters having trouble at school also isn't even ''unique'', its a very generic idea that many stories use to add some extra drama, which again is clearly not the authors style as she makes light hearted stories with pretty art that are more fluffy, so it wouldn't even suit the story. The drama in this is the struggle of realizing feelings and how they will end up together, which is something a lot of BL's do in the fluff genre, again, this has NOTHING to do with ''laziness'' and to do with a specific story type that the author enjoys making. Calling cuteness ''tasteles'' is again, very rude.
And as someone who loves 19days, comparing them doesn't even make sense as 19days is a short comic style, they're only a few frames and are meant to be fast reads just for a laugh, with a plot added to it later on and VERY slowly. It's not even the same style of story writing as short comics and longer ones should not be compared.
And lastly, as someone who has been reading BL since 2011 and has read of 4000 of them, this has not made me bored and is a very enjoyable read. Why? Because not everyone only likes 1 type of BL and wants every BL they read to be ''unique'' and have 100 types of drama thrown in for ''excitement'', having some nice relaxing fluff here and there is not something bad.
If you don't like a story thats fine, but next time please don't drag down the author by calling them lazy and acting like they're only writing these types of stories for views when everyone knows a lot of the most populair BL's nowadays are the ones with abuse and extremely psychological stories, if she wanted the ''views'' she would've done that. And even if someone makes a story for views, that wouldn't correlate to how ''lazy'' they are? jeez.
I don't even want to respond to such a angered reply. I have the right to say what I think, and if someone doesn't understand what I was trying to say and just bark at me repeating the same shit and distorting my words, I don't see why I would take my time to write a clear, long response to someone who obviously isn't gonna change his mind. Have a nice day.
I think it would be worth to read their take on what you define as “uniqueness” since it’s the main reason why you don’t like this story.
Oh, sorry, perhaps I didn’t really express myself well... English isn’t my first language, and it’s still quite hard for me to write what I mean rightly... I’m sorry. It isn’t what I wanted to say, the main reason is Dongha ; I’m not fond of « cute » characters, they make me... like Yurio when he listen to Agape for the first time. I just prefer when the characters have a affirmed, hum, character. I don’t really understand why would someone write a comic not to make it unique... I just talked about « 19 days » because it sounded to me like an exemple of funny comic, even though it doesn’t really looks like « no way, vampires doesn’t exist »... Again, I’m sorry for my first reply, I was a little angry and tired ... Also, it probably is true that the term « lazy » quite is rude to describe an author of webcomic, I know that it’s hard to write and draw a story...
Good continuation (=・ω・=)
Oh no it’s fine! It just seemed like you were dismissing what they said and since it’s over text it can, unfortunately, come off quite rude which wasn’t your intention as you said :)
That was stupid as fuck.
Ikr, very basic. I rate 2/5. Only reason not rating 1/5 is cause the art style is better than most others.
So much chapters today. The uploader really is a cinnamon roll (=・ω・=)
Well, I was shipping since the moment with the apple, but now it's even more obvious . I feel like I'm gonna love this couple (๑•ㅂ•)و✧
It was pretty obvious at the beginning, wasn't it?
I don’t like how white hair’s friend don’t even think about his crush’s thoughts. Like, he’s already thinking about dating, but he hasn’t talked to him, and, I dunno, but can’t he imagine a second that he....uh, don’t like him... （￣へ￣）
I love how stoic is the hero, even when n°15 is teasing him...
It’s a simple love, they’re so cute together, and made for each other. The only complicated thing is the best friend. I hope he’s not gonna make a mess...
His body quite is looking like Jimi's one (Yari club), or is it just me ?