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ngl the ending would have been so much more impactful if MC or duke died
I had a small feeling nobody would die so all tension wasn't there throughout the whole thing
if the duke died it would have been so symbolic of how his love for MC was worth giving up his immirtality for since living an eternal life without his life's only purpose isn't one worth living
or MC's death would have made the duke's situation so much more difficult choosing to die or continue living for the sake of his dead family...
and the prince only changed due to MC so who knows how he would be if she was gone.
I love a happy ending but sometimes I wish the high stakes actually mattered
it would be so good if authors didn't force shitty female characters and straight men writing women stuff
like there are so many ways to write good female characters and these people choose "useless + obsessed with mc + damsel in distress" for all of it
exploring her privelege and explaining pity vs goodwill was great, love it.
But her being nonsensically attached to mc for no reason other than for straight men's fantasy made it so much worse.
She's a tool for her father, an object following MC, the first thing she does is try to marry him... so annoying
What are you yapping about? Straight men can write amazing women just like straight women can make amazing men. Both usually aren’t good at writing both though. There are also many Romances where the guy is obsessed with the female lead and he’s always saving her. So I don’t know what you’re on.
Like it seems you just read things only made for men or something. Don’t even know if this author is a girl or boy.
the emotional parts of this story are making me cry
ESPECIALLY the older sister's reaction to MC's abandonment issue
oldest**
I meant to like omg ┗( T﹏T )┛
dont read it lol
so boring snd generic, MC is inconsistent, world building is just "people in power bad" with no nuance
i kinda support mc's message of eliminating and reforming the powerful bad people tho.
EAT THE RICH
literally would be sucj a good story without the unecessary shitty unrequited love plots
so annoying
this would be so much better with good art and a bit more consistency
still a good enough read in general, even better if u like this art style ._.
Bro I was reading the comments before actually reading and was like wdym much better with good art ? …..and HELP omg….why are they so fugly oh hell naw
MC is too nice and too dumb and naïve and it makes me angry. She blushes and gets shy at the smallest fucking thing it's giving 12 year old fantasized romance
(assumed) ML is typical black cat type - annoying and an asshole
kid is kinda okay? but also something is weird
of everyhting though MC blushing and crushing on the random guy is too ovrrdone and I'm sick of this stupid trope