
S2 and still not discovered while being under his nose with only a veil... Sigh this author has decided to drag the story with a fake mystery. I'm gonna wait it out

This is the part that is so unnecessary.
MC knows he could solve both their problems and get revenge on his completely vile birth family in one fell swoop.
BUT nooooooooo dummy has too much cum and alcohol in his brain to connect those dots.
Plus, MC isnāt slick so heās just coming across as SUS to those that could be his ally in this situation.

"Honey", he has seen him naked. Fully naked and taken him in several positions. There's more to a body than pubic hair. He has the same hair length, the same haircut, the same body, and if the veil didn't matter then the author wouldnt have made it the heart of the mystery. I'm not the one who said that the key element in hiding his identity was the veil, the author is. And you know why? Because it's bad writing.
I know you want to be a " kind reader" and try to be understanding by coming up with explanation that the author themselves isn't giving, but from my 13 years if experience reading BL, I can tell you know it's genuinely judst that shitty veil. And you'll see that I'm right I'm the "grand reveal". You'll be greatly disappointed but at least next time you'll be able to predict the story better.

Well, quite the little outburst you had there, didn't you? And what, you have problem with being called "honey"? Then, is "darling" better?
And of course I'm bringing up explanation for it bcuz I'm reading the story, not judging it like you with ur "13 years of experience", if u say that, how many master pieces might have u already read? Why are you comparing this one story to something it isn't?
And the not recognizing thing? That's literally the plot isn't it? Why did you read something if u don't like the plot itself??
To say the story is the best? No it certainly isn't, of course. But shouldn't u with all that experience of urs be able to know better then others?
I never said the story was sooooo good, I just wrote what had happened in the story itself.
But boy u are writing like I offended ur family tree or something.
Anyways, that's my opinion, and u can have urs, if the story is so bad don't read it, I hope u have a good day/night, darling.

And analysis learning? What do u think this is? A true crime documentary? No, it's not, it's a story about fictional characters that don't exist, if u didn't know, and this is outright an overused plot,
And there is no way this story can prove me wrong bcuz I'm not the one getting angry at literally nothing, I wanna enjoy the story from the author's perspective, not compare it to something like, heaven's official blessing or the untamed. Bcuz u speak of soooo much experience u should have read them.

1. "Honey" is cool and all until it's completely devoid of kindness so keep your honey to yourself.
2. We're both reading the story, you simply have no pattern recognition skill. It has nothing to do with reading masterpieces, you're losing track.
3. You don't understand the difference between the concept of plot and trope, so I will let you do some education by researching that.
4. I know better than you, indeed.
5. What you wrote didn't happen in the story you literally made up something, in the "story itself" the veil hides the big mystery.
6. If you had offended my family I wouldn't have been so polite and patient.
7. The story was great until the shitty fake mystery trope which is exactly why I'm waiting it out, get some comprehension skills, darling.

Can this mf have a normal reaction? Pissing me off being all extra I was scared for a second I thought the bad guys were gonna catch him at the archives

If you're gonna run your mouth acting smart at least do it when you know what you're talking about because you look goofy. You don't need mental illness to experience psychosis however you can avoid experiencing it through therapy.
There's an old saying that when you don't know you shut up. Go check that.
Also, mental illness is not an insult it's a goddamn condition there's nothing shameful about that, assuming that someone is mentally ill is absolutely not wrong so go be fake woke somewhere else.

The comments are so dramatic lmao I genuinely thought it'd be at least worse than indomitable champion but no

But it IS traumatizing⦠just cause you might read more porn than others(not trying to attack you I beg you donāt take it that way) some people have different tolerance levels for porn and different things weird out some more than others, so while you might see this as your average every day porn, for others, this was the worst part of their day.
HE TOOK HIM TO THE CASTLE Oh kay you're done why do I have a feeling he's going to try to run away?