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So essentially…




Mc is the ML’s Sunfish he has to protect lol—





Not the ORV flashbacks lol—

Honestly at this point why is she still worried about the Daehan guild ;; she’s powerful enough to destroy everyone and should just be focusing on the main bad guy at this point

Like, just kill that ugly bitch already I swear

Expecting her to one day have a dream about ml becoming Cthulhu daddy again and then eating the seafood that comes out of his body, happily. However, switch to reality, and it’s just them in bed, with her nibbling at his hair and he feels conflicted about whether she liked him with the curse more XD

Then a small extra panel of him showing her a ton of seafood that’s been imported and preserved with the time magic so she can have fresh seafood again(and still stay with him lol) XD

Omg just read some of the images and my boy is finally back into an alive body woo!!(I think anyway lol)

It was worth letting this story marinate lol XD

Dude acting like he’s her boyfriend when she legit probably can’t even remember his face ah the tragic second ml(probably not even second lol, maybe like 5th)

This is “misunderstandings: the manga” in its purest form lol. I really don’t know how they went multiple chapters doing the “omg, he hates me!” Even though seme literally confessed to him multiple times and stuff XD

Kinda wished the coworker lying wasn’t for some weird “test” and it was cause he thought seme was bothering uke and stuff. Like, we didn’t know who they were and there were no scenes of uke talking about seme to that coworker in the previous chapters. They showed up to create drama and then left with an “oops! My bad lol” type energy.

Uke narrated his pov, and if you wanted to add the coworker, you could’ve had some of uke’s narration be explaining what happened to the coworker. Which would then build a connection between uke and the coworker, fleshing out their relationship, while also delving into uke’s pov and personality.

Would’ve been nice if the coworker thought seme was someone/a stalker bothering uke, even approaching uke at work, so they decided to scare seme off. However, later when uke basically breaks down about it and stuff, the coworker is like “wait, that’s who you’ve been talking about?!! I’m so sorry!! This is what I said to him” which then makes uke realize what happened.

Rather than the final misunderstanding/argument they had be the reason uke confesses, I wished he wanted to confess more proactively after he realized the misunderstanding with the coworker. Then, seeing the mc with his sister, thinks it’s too late and is about to give up again. However, he sees seme’s injured hand and remembers his smile or some shit, and takes the courage to run to him and confess to him. Maybe after crying and then running away afterwards, thinking he’s gonna get rejected, seme chases after him and the smut can remain the same or something idk

Uke just doesn’t seem proactive at all in the relationship and I felt like if he had some more urgency in the story, he’d be more likable and less indecisive.

Random thoughts to make the story flow smoother, cause so far the story seems kinda like a bunch of tropes in sequential order lol

(Also if we had some background about his host life and maybe a previous crush he had on a straight guy, his rejection to seme would’ve made more sense)

It was really funny and cute but then he turned into an adult and things have just been taking a weird tonal shift and stuff rip. I came here for funny interactions with some mild angst ;;

Axel is crazy but the love I hold for this man I’m sorry—

In his defense, he was basically groomed to be an absolute psycho with abandonment issues okay???

Like, when he has that puppy-dog like appearance from getting scolded or praised ajdjwidnekdjdid I want to pet him and tell him it’ll be alright, even if he can kill me with a flick of the forehead

I love Pi and all, but I liked him more as a cute innocent platonic best friend that helps mc.(him being sus is breaking my heart rn) We need more love for Axel in this comment section



Also was expecting Ludevig to be the sad second ml and was gonna feel bad for him, but doesn’t seem like it rn and I hope it stays that way lol XD

Idk when I’ve last been so infuriated by a misunderstanding in a shoujo before. Like, I thought I was used to it, but this shit is like giving me an ulcer and a migraine at the same time.

Like, this isn’t even a misunderstanding anymore. Moka annoys me with her wishy washy nature, but kurosaki is getting on my nerves. That classroom scene still makes no fucking sense to me. What type of ml confirms he was with a “pretty girl” over summer break when he’s already dating mc like wtf

Bro dump them both girl. Was rooting for kurosaki but he’s acted like an ass for the past couple of chapters for no reason. How are you going to be doing this stuff to “protect her” when she’s fucking crying over your stupid ass. I’m so pissed at him rn. The other guy is shit too. I want moka to cut off both of them and hang out with her friend instead. Maybe after a time skip and after kurosaki has suffered from his stupid actions before they talk again. If he comes back and they get back together within the next chapter, I’m going to be so pissed. I get misunderstandings but what was with him just confirming he was with a “pretty girl” over summer break when he already has a girlfriend. Like, I know his emotions are also out of wack, but there was no reason for that. Like, it was like he was trying to give the wrong signals. And the absolute galls to ignore her when she was trying to reach out omg. Get your head out of your fucking ass. I really hope they don’t just shed some tears and get back together. He needs to actually suffer for the shit he’s putting moka through for no reason. Like, his personality took a complete shit dive for no reason and there is no reason for him to act like this petty child for so long. I get taking maybe a week or so max to sort out your feelings, but ALL of summer break and you still act like this sniveling child??? Again, that classroom scene where he decided not to clarify the obvious misunderstanding about meeting another girl is so infuriating. I would’ve probably forgiven a lot, but that scene irked me so much and I don’t want her to end up with him now. Like, all I ask for is a ml that is loyal and adamantly shows he’s loyal, not whatever the hell wishy washy shit that was. If it was a thing like “oh that girl was planning something with him to get Mika’s reaction or whatever” I’m gonna be even more pissed.