FL seems... flat? I just remember dropping it because FL just... couldn't?
it gets better tho, her character became more complex as the story progresses
yeah honeslty at some points i was frustrated with the FL because she genuinely just seemed... incompetent? or ig flat... idk the story overall just feels unnecessarily dragged out.
Anyone want to explain why the duke is apologising to a random child for being a bad father instead of his actual kids? And to be fair I'd be pissed too if I was working for someone as a financial advisor and they gave their personal checkbook to a CHILD. Whatf is with manhwa authors and making the most incompetent adults? （￣へ￣）
Not to mention not a single author I've read seem to understand the actual function of a checkbook. They're useless unsigned.
My thing is why is the financial advisor still employed? He's not a good manager or good with finances 'cause why and how he brought up the useless (to the family he's employed by) saint was insane to me.
Oh and no one in that family sees her as a random child. If even in her past life when they were less expressive with their feelings, they saw her as family enough that they wanted to make it official, random is even further from the current timeline. It could be the trope that Dad's are closer to their daughters.Or it could be that the oldest brother has had to mature quick with his dead mom, dying brother and withdrawn father all happening at the same time, being independent and pretty reserved strained tf out of their relationship. And the trope of an adopted sunshine sister/daughter to mend family wounds/communication is being employed here. *Shrugs*
How stupid is the FL?
like 3/10, she's likeable atleast but she's quite dense she didnt know that the one she's avoiding is her fiancée, but it's a good read if u like obsessive ml typa shit, and the fl has quite a few charms i like her
Olivia is too... boring? Bare bones cardboard cutesy personality and then nothing else. Even when it comes to her actually fighting her dialogue is some version of "la la la la laaa laaaa". It isn't giving creepy it's giving someone writing their first horror story.
I think you should give it a few more reads it's actually quite fun!
I'm okay, but thank you for the offer.
It's the same stupid "MC gets powers to rape people" plot. Fuck this shit I'm out.
"All of this chaos is for his amusement, I can't read him."
Girl, then don't. Focus on survival. You're blushing like a schoolgirl knowing damn well he said you have to act in love. Then just act like it and blatantly ignore it instead of constantly questioning it like you have the intelligence of a fucking fish holy shit.
Like this girly be testing my patience she was all good and then the instant the contract was made she just falls into generic FL #399298171588825839469127. Gping to continue to see how many more braincells she loses. :)
Update: I hope every time she remembers her past it gets progressively worse. She genuinely deserves it and the ML deserves it too. Only reasonal people here are the random NPCs and the kids.
XDDDDD
Girl is a walking HR violation and an entire liability. Like can do nothing. Just a thing there to get saved. Dropping this like a hot pan of burnt food into the trash. :)
Tactless girl just stop talking lmfaooo every time you do you regret it
Like I was cackling through the first two chapters and just the perspective the women are drawn from but they dare to freak out over fetishization of gay men (fair but author, grow up?). Good to read if you want to learn how not to write dialogue.
The way women r drawn makes me wanna kms but i still read it bc i think its interesting enough
they draw everyone like that they’re just aura farming