
i just binged this and i love it but the romance felt forced. aside from a destined plot of them being together, there really isn't anything solid that could've warranted them developing feelings for each other a handsome face and a little interest is something so minor but i guess i understand. i just think it could've been developed with a better premise.
also i think mel having little to no trouble getting major victories made the story boring. the plot armor is too thick.

ive read tragedy short stories and can confidently say this story's ending was ass

i recommend "1866" if you guys want to feel fulfilled. it only has 4 chapters but good lord does it rip your heart to shreds. i personally havent read chapter 4 after all these years cz i was already crying at chapter 3 and knew what chapter 4 had in store. so yeaaahhhh they had a happy ending in my reality since i havent read the actual ending
the MC is just living his life while the ML keeps on coming on like some horny teenager he's pissing me off lowkey, is there nothing else he can offer to the story??
fr bro