
the plot is all over the place especially near the latter part of the story the confession was totally sudden the build up was lacking and the way his trauma was dealt with was just shit it was supposed to be the center of the story but the focus went from that to the seme's POV his inferiority complex/inability to trust the whole thing about his trauma was shoved aside until the end when suddenly he's cured by the power of love lol bullshit and the rape was totally unnecessary it makes no damn sense what right does he have to do that to him that really nailed the coffin for me well anyway since ive read it i have no choice but to buy it i hope to see the author improve in their next work

his soul after jumping off the train track probably traveled back in time to when he was in high school that's why he has no memory of what happened at that period of time it was his adult self that was in his body and his teenage self/soul might be stuck in his future body that is in a coma or something

wasnt there another yaoi like this? uke gets into a car accident when after he goes to seme's wedding, uke's soul goes back in time when they were in highschool, seme has a power where he can see spirits and they both fall in love. after the uke's soul comes back to the present time it shown that he and seme are married for a long time
how is this even 8.9