great art but aside from being problematic the plot is just bad even and as something classified as erotic BL it feels dull and boring i haven't really (genuinely) enjoyed sensei's works since their debut work Nure Nezumi-tachi no Koi the manga they released last year also has the same feel but they'll be releasing another one this March 25th i wish it'll be better than the past two releases it's about exes i think and one of them is a bodyguard the cover looks interesting i wish it's also the same inside
im okay with poly relationships but i want the relationship between puppy and blondie to develop more it felt like their relationship was just brushed aside we need another volume for that to happen i guess another thing is that i did not like how noncon had to be involved just so black haired guy's relationship with the two guys can move forward i mean there could have been better routes sensei could have taken but it had to be noncon for BOTH of them :(( i also find it weird how they never really sincerely apologized to black haired guy even tho themselves especially blondie have experienced being taken advantage before :(( at least do the bare minimum gosh if this ever gets another volume I'd like to see both of them reflect on and address their past actions
god another update second chapter and im already crying this much
they kind of remind of yuuji and megumi my comfort characters from jjk so it hurts even more for me
just a simple plot overall but the delivery's too good i love complicated plots as well but most of the time they're not delivered well so it's always such a waste this one is just simple but the author sure knows how to draw you in they're a very good storyteller i love the youthful vibe and how the bl elements are presented
follow the author on twt:
https://twitter.com/kritsumuji?s=09
purchase this here
https://renta.papy.co.jp/renta/sc/frm/item/237344/?utm_id=a-r2115c1
I followed the author on twt and they uploaded some panels from the manga.. (or not?) the one with ice cream kiss scene (｡・//ε//・｡) oh my, my heart just melt
I think everything was good EXCEPT for that part where they essentially had a "threesome" that was just too much did is not a kink sensei as a whole, i can say that the plot is fresh (representation!) and the message the story conveys is wonderful. but i think the storytelling/delivery became quite messy towards the end. it also seems to be lacking on the psychological side and because of that i wasn't really drawn into any of the character's psyche. the way rei's condition was dealt with in the second volume is quite disappointing since i was expecting a lot from the first volume. it felt kind of shallow and random. maybe that's because this is sensei's first time writing a manga with such deep concepts. there's a lot of room for improvement. the resolution wasn't as fulfilling as i thought it would be so I'm going to give this 4.75/5 stars.
this is rated 9.3 stars because???
my expectation went down the drain
bye my day is ruined i guess
I do not know either
my expectations were high i just ended up being annoyed
I feel indifferent... There is no spark for it to be high rating... Well.. Many high ranking ones are just generic stuff
Well guess what? You do not have any rights to be annoyed by reading a story which you read in an illegal site (don't get me wrong) the art is so good which means that author must have put a lot of effort doing so, at least be more appreciative.
Excuse me but I actually purchase what I read. I even purchased this even if I don't like it because I read it here. I think I have every right to be annoyed since I'm a consumer who actually pays for the stuff I read.
This is based from what you said okay lmao.
And by the way I never said the art is bad, the story is. I can see that the art is good based from the cover. It's rated 9.3 stars here so I had high expectations for the plot and I read it. I ended up not liking it though but now I have to purchase it lol.
As for you, since you like it that much, I suggest you purchase it too that's if you haven't yet.
https://renta.papy.co.jp/renta/sc/frm/item/211224/
It looks like you didn't get my point here, I never said that you didn't like the art or what so ever. What I'm trying to say here is you are reading from an illegal website and you are paying nothing the author surely puts an effort either to the story plot or the art (again, I'm not putting this to you) be more appreciative *imagine working your a** out in your story just for some people to call it annoying or they feel annoyed*
You read it because of the cover so you had a high expectation. Didn't you come across with the statement "don't judge the book by its cover"? It means the book is at fault because it made you excited then annoyed?
As for me (like you said) I buy books (the real one: manga, manhwa, manhua, novel and etc.) every time I get to visit the bookstore so you don't have to worry dear.
Your argument is that you think that people who read this in an illegal site and pay nothing to the author should be more appreciative of the author's work. However, I am as what I've said a proper consumer. I buy books, e-books, and even fanbooks as well Based from what you said, as a proper consumer, don't I have the freedom to comment about my opinion on this free space in the internet? What do you think is the purpose of the comment section? Where do you think should I comment about my opinion instead if not here?
It seems like you did not understand me either. I would like to clarify that I did not decide to read this solely because I thought the illustration on the cover was good. I wasn't judging the book by its cover. I was complaining about the rating remember? THE RATING I would like to emphasize that since it looks like you have forgotten.
If you've properly purchased this then that's good. I don't want to be lectured by some random person online who's not even paying a single cent for this book.
the development and pacing is so good i love it so much
gosh the pacing is so good im definitely buying this