their romance feels underdeveloped, all they have is liking each other when they were younger n that's it. ik its a smutty story at its core but their should equally be just as much of emotional stuff if i wanna root for the two of them
did the script really ask you to pin him down all sexy like that? or were you just going with the flow
this manga rlly just starts saying "if you don't fuck him he WILL die bro he's gonna die alone sad and depressed if you don't fuck him right now take responsibility so he can live and not die bc he's going to die also did we mention there's a chance he'll die of death and loneliness if not fucked by you?"
it sure is a romance story ill give the author that
so mc had like, three guys into him, one who had some internalized homophobia, bully, and more ruthless bully who only likes pretty people. clearly, he got with the lesser evil.
i was kinda hoping he stayed chubby, but ig its not bad, the author clearly wanted to get back to drawing twig twinks. to the main ml's benefits , he didn't start liking him after he got skinny like one comment said, like he's seems interested in him the first time they had sex. the convoluted "i only like strong people" bit was dumb, and he straight up admitted to in the second to last chapter sooo--all in all, not bad, 7/10, -0.5 for skinny uke's sharp ass chin
8/10. like, the first one felt like a new couple still getting used to confining each other, which I'm guessing is what the author was going for, and this one is like, a couple with a strong relationship ahead of them
not that its not enjoyable, but each plot point is like oh he's too stoic to share his feelings and the other one overshares but not enough, and not in the right way, they make up for it by being cute though, 7.5/10
it took me out the moment i started binge reading this, slap some gray eyes on haegyung and its technically a rlly long percabeth fanfic. sincerely hope the author takes a well-needed break considering all the delays, i honestly wouldn't mind if not a lot of the stories were resolved if it means less work for them to do
?? Bestie from which angle?
the delusional angle
Lmao at least you're aware