
Can I just be real for a sec? Despite that heartwarming chapter, I just wanna say—I hope the three of them break up for real. Like, I don't give a shit. The way the blonde guy used to treat Uki? TOXIC. I hope those two break up. Then the blonde guy would be sooo depressed, and the black-haired dude would fuck him. There—that would be my happy ending, 'cause no shit, I hate twink— Oh well, all jokes aside, I’m just desperate for a hot seme x seme scene.

NAHHH, because the seme is so freaking hot and cute!!! The way he holds those cupcakes—cutie patootie—it totally screams, "I like sweets!" And those hand grips? Damn, HOT!! And then there’s the way he’s all cozy in those blankets—makes me wanna hug him so bad!! ᕙ(๑˃ꇴ˂๑ )ᕗ Like, please, let me wrap him up myself. Also, when he puts his face on Uki's back—gokgok—I’m literally dying (。•︿•。)!! The way he’s embracing his heat? AHHHH!! And OH GOD—the way he desperately wants kisses?? I’m losing it—INTERNAL SCREAMING!!!

I'm extremely disappointed. Comparing this to "The Shape of Us," I'd say "The Shape of Us" is better. Both share a similar plot involving Two additional people in their lives, but this one feels bland. I was happy there was a child, but the author wasted that opportunity—skipping the pregnancy process entirely and jumping ahead five months. Then, suddenly, he's in heat again, leading to numerous intercourse scenes instead of meaningful storytelling. My disappointment is immense.
Also, what is "'JUST' the three of us together" Wake up, bro—there are two more of you (two more tops; you're not alone). (T⌓T)
Adding to my frustration, why did it start as if there was only one male lead who had already won? We can clearly see how much Uki loves him, but chapter 2 destroyed me.
I still can't accept how this story is progressing—so much potential wasted. ε-(ーдー)
Anyway, this is really misleading. I thought Uki would have more in-depth storytelling, but it was just plain.
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Omg, I was waiting for triplets—triplets that look like the three tops! But guess what... we got another skip. NDBIWNFHINWHIE
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Continue... I don't know anymore...
Eyyy, but we do need to give credit to the time skip where the three tops spend time with the kid, also sharing stories about the past. I actually liked that—nice, author. (ദദ ˙ᗜ˙)
OH!! ISBJFHDB OMG NEVERMIND... TRIPLETS!!!!
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Lion's Uki is WHAT!?.. I'm sorry, but when? WHENNN? That freaking one time again. (T⌓T)(T⌓T) Seriously, what the...
Anyways:
• Art: 10000/10
• Spiciness: 6.9/10
• Story: 5.9/10
• My disappointed 999999999999/10 (I thought I found a Gem:D)
I would say if you have an interpretation of this story, you might find many small details that could have been expanded upon. Sadly, the author chose the most basic and fastest route instead of adding more depth, which is why, for me, this story is bland. Overall rating: 3 out of 5 stars.
If you're looking for something similar, I recommend "The Shape of Us." The spicy scenes are spicier, and it has in-depth storytelling that brought tears to my eyes and made me question my life choices.—If you're interested, a trigger warning: it may make you uncomfortable.
Omg, their relationship is literally built on a twig, mannn. But also—shit, dude—I wanna know what the two semes' day-to-day life was like before the three of them started dating. PLEASE, I’M BEGGING YOU, AUTHOR—LET ME TAKE A PEEK INTO THAT REALITY!