
I'm sorry but... The writing is really awkward and cringy @-@ I only just got to the part in the beginning where he is fighting the water elements and it's just the way of speaking is bad "this is ineffective, that's annoying!" It reminds me of a robot I love the art style and character design but the beginning is so similar to solo leveling I'm shook by it idk which one came first but the way the portals work is even the same way and the beginning though downgraded was basically the same he's weak but somehow he gets the classifications for an upgrade and somehow manages to single-handedly kill the hidden boss after watching all of his friends die?? @_@ and the boss just kind of stood there..? Even tho he wiped out everyone else in seconds but somehow this weak healer was able to not only pick up his friend's sword but also pierce through the hidden boss's skin that even his friend who was a higher level than him couldn't barely even do? And this was before the upgrade as well? @.@ idk doesn't make much sense to me ig if anything it made it seem like he was actually op and let his friends die then killed the hidden boss
I hope this gets better because I do like the art style but the characters feel flimsy and the writing feels rushed and awkward and I'm finding myself laughing at that instead of feeling bad for him and becoming immersed into the story and how it's going to further his character development

I know he's the ML.. but.. I'm embarrassed for her if she falls for this he had so many chances! A year and a half to go back and try to make it up to her! NTM THE REAL HIM IS A PRICK ANYWAY please get someone better he has caused her personality to change so much as well and it's just sad.. and tbh I hate Riddle a lot but even he'd be a better option over Emel and that's pretty low ._. (riddle might actually be worse but then again we haven't really seen him do anything yet so he's currently better)

At first Isabella was really annoying but I think I started liking her around chapter 39? I think is what it was when she came back with the food and healed him when he was about to die I knew she was chill before but it just still makes me mad that she only found him interesting once Frey was no longer Frey and became Lucas .-. no one ever helped him or stepped in even though there was plenty of people more powerful than David and even made him kill himself bs man that's why I don't like her or anyone else that just stood by and watched him be beaten everyday even tho they had the power to stop it

WHERE IS THE SOCCER GIRL AT?!? I want the reunion .-. or is the soccer girl supposed to be that one girl with the long black hair that's his neighbor and she just switched over to swimming instead of soccer? and he just doesn't recognize her because she's not on the soccer team? Idk but I feel like we should have met her already
I'm just gonna be honest here I do not care about the blonde-headed girl or the black-headed elf guy ._. yet it keeps focusing on them for some reason?? And I don't really feel like our main character has his priorities straight like I know he's not really worried since only his main conscience is in the game while he's still basically alive in the real world but STILL the whole point of even starting this game was so he could go in and find his dad I know it's going to be difficult and the only way to get out of the game is to beat it but still feels like he's just kind of messing around he could be going out and doing what the blonde head girl is doing and leveling up more and getting stronger but he's not really doing that and I'm confused about why he's going through this quest test thing anyway? don't get me wrong I don't want the story to feel rushed but at the same time I want some progress at least
I like the story but everything feels slow paced and not really moving kinda like a snail?
Also Beta IS ADORABLE and he also kind of reminds me of his friend that he was talking to before he entered the game he was also eating a lot and he had those piercings it's probably not him but it would be cool if it was
Sme thoughts exactly
Well, he joined the adventure’s exam for more benefits that could help him in his travel being in an adventure’s guild. More quests, free board in inn, and other stuffs. I think that is worth it to take an adventure’s exam. I do agree on this chapter they placed too much importance on the blonde hair and the black hair guy, but I think the author is simply trying to add back story into characters that could be his party members throughout the story. He most likely is not going to be alone in his adventure. My proof of this is that This is the cover of the webtoon. besides, being an adventure from the adventure’s guild would definitely help him when he has to travel around the game world. He isn’t that Overpowered yet. He needs more Information about this world if he wants to survive than simply looking for his dad that he literally has no idea on how he even look like.