I mean, the story was pretty good I guess... There's just many unnecessary things added for no reason, I'm not sure if it's to "push" the relationship but it would be better without it, I just don't see the importance of mc dating another guy for like 2 chapters (without it, there's no difference), the sexual assault as well seems too unnecessary. Amidst all of those unnecessary things, there's also so many things that wasn't given a focus. But hey, who am I to say such things when I didn't spent any penny.











Y'all remind me when twinkle twinkle doesn't have the filter taeui gave him anymore