This story has gotten so much hate, but honestly I didn't mind it. Plus I actually enjoyed it until people started complaining..
"critical review" ? What's critical about making other people uncomfortable? Can't everyone just read the story and enjoy it. If they don't like it, then they can keep it to themselves. Complaining about how certain characters are written. Not all stories are perfect, but man its people that are constantly bashing it. Its annoying.
Like I said, itās a critical review. We are in a PUBLIC comment section. Are they not allowed to tell their opinion about the story? Do you honestly think that comment sections should only say that the story is good? Iām confused how the critical reviews are making people uncomfortable. Are they uncomfortable because people donāt like a story that they really like? If thatās true then they need to grow up. Learn what a opinion and critical review is. Because I think you donāt know what they mean.









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