
it's only been a couple of days or maybe months AND he's been locking himself in this room. Holy fvck was that upgrade! a weak ass healer? You actually managed to stab a high level monster? while all the fighters didn't stand a chance? and the moment he went out for a walk, found a dungeon and easily eliminated evolved elementals? and holy crap that hp, stamina shit he got. I want one!
I know the author/artist wanted to draw his struggles fighting upgraded monsters and show how he's leveling up as it goes on but this is not it. It was so rushed to show his power that it looked like he was never weak and just getting used to using more strength that was just sealed away or something. No desperation, the feelings for his friends were thrown in the back, he wasn't struggling fighting and he isn't using his head to figure out ways to deal with situations. Just thank the system and call it virtual assistant. It's still early and I'm looking forward to improvements and plot twists. The art was great, the story was OK, we just want to feel something when reading an action, adventure webcomic.
CHAPTER 01
- first, fvck u demigod! y do that to a volunteer?!
CHAPTER 04
- 2nd, fvck all the classmates. how dare they suddenly have heart thumps after ignoring the bullying?! b*tches don't u dare! also uncle mage don't u dare be liking them!
CHAPTER 05
- please don't suddenly do PDA. I was not ready! aaaahhh my heart!
- (my fantasies wishing for the gay. jk. don't kill me. issa joke)
CHAPTER 06
- I really am an unforgiving bastard. I find them annoying. The asshole, her and the pervert
CHAPTER 07
- same, uncle, same. She fine.
- dang! I don't know what to say! for an auntie to be blown away by her student. I have conflicting feeling with this, uncle!
CHAPTER 09
- Miss, can you not be rude? like please?
CHAPTER 10
- what a fondue in a beach. Such polite delinquents!
CHAPTER 11
- I knew it! He has Gintoki disease!
CHAPTER 13
- ok jun. You can come into the harem
CHAPTER 16
- b*tch we gotta earn somehow! c'mon we gotta have something!
CHAPTER 22
- "Do not copy" "Yes, I will"
CHAPTER 30
- AAAAAAAnnd we got another one