
Honestly i didn’t have much expectations since btd wasn’t that good but holy shit this is honestly just plain porn like straight from a hub video all smut no plot but if thats what the author wanted to write this should have been a easy oneshot this was just terrible its watching poor anna get cucked so hard. Lily honestly wanted someone to match her freak which was horrible because she got water down to nothing but a sex crave fiend i would rather watch real porn then read this at least real porn funny this was just a painful read and a painful story had so much potential author should hire a writer or get a ghost writer like drake or something please someone take the pen away before she threatens to release another story
The girl is honestly such a cutie and so pretty the problem is that this story clearly going to be the stereotypical harem where everyone wants this plain aaah looking dude that doesn’t stand out which is so annoying honestly the girls in this story are all cuties and hot babes but their all centered around the mc nonchalant ass attitude and all blush and get shy when this rent a girlfriend looking dude yaps his shit such a tragedy this fine babes deserve a personality too aside from being love interest
am more interested in the other dude that was shown then the booring mc thats the kirito of this universe bring personality to this women and give my girl more leg instead of just two sticks with a bit of width