
idk if the translation is bad or what but, in my opinion, the story kinda rushed(?) or maybe because i read them in one sitting, also i feel like theres some “gap” in the story, like, some things needs to be describe more, not just it happens suddenly, some events needs to be explained more, example, back story about her first crush, the author just explained briefly, couldve been better, and also about the ML! need more explanation about his backstory, and their uni days also need to elaborate more, for me, their meeting in uni is so??? plain(?) like they met each other, then fed baby pang, and the author just described that the ML would see her like that :( couldve been more hdkdkdkdkd this is just what i felt, since i expected alot from this story bcs they made it into kdrama. and also ive read other stories, positively yours, business proposal and daytime star so yep, thats why i have high expectations for this story
im glad im not the only one TT i also want more on yiyun and the babies (and also the secretary) but less on those brothers………….. i dont wanna kno about them, i want the babies TT