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the older dude is 18, it's not a big age gap

You would not like italy then..

For some reason mangago cut off the rest of a comment I spent 5 minutes on.

Fuck it; I'm nothing if not a nerd for media

The story is rushed and it's hard to understand because there's too much information thrown at you at once. Suddenly you're dealing with the main plot and now there's all these details about the politics, the land and who killed who and why and it's all in speech bubbles so it's less impactful.

We don't grow a connection to the characters before they suddenly give us a heavy flashback which just makes me as the viewer go "?".

The main character has like 10 different things happening to her and it happens so quick that it's just sort of like, oh?

Also; There's like 5 different plots happening at once. Which is FINE in stories but not when each subplot is happening very fast and involves a lot of technical information. Such as main plot (FL wants to eliminate the queen due to her evil ways, which fair, makes sense!), ML wants to lead revolution (cool, ties in), but then it gets more complicated with the divine power stuff (she's suddenly been visited by the holy angel of divinity), now she has divine powers and can heal stuff, now it's alluded that she's a reincarnation of this divine angel who sees the FL as what I presume to be her mother, There's a guy that knows our FL and cares deeply for her, then in the midst of all this there's all the politics stuff about; wagons, trade, power discourse, plague and war. Man

Dude this is all so good. I came to the comments after catching up to ch 48 and man. It 100% is rushed. What shocked me was when they made her stay in the north so long but still with the expectations she would make it back to the castle without the queen noticing. I was confuseedd and then they sped up everything all of a sudden when I thought the going to the north was just one step in the plot but nope it was a fucking LEAP that somehow the queen already planned for. Im also not a big fan of how chapters dont connect smoothly. Like when they rescued elliot they jumped straight to where the princess was captured only to go back and explain what happened after saving him. Its okay for like one twist, but I feel like this story does it so often it gets confusing. I genuinely thought the princess was fake in that scene until it wasnt. I wish it flowed smoother. If theres a novel maybe it does? I'll have to look into that later.

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