Oh my god why do these chapters feel 5 seconds long
So I tried to read this but from the first chapter there's too much going on; they cram information without getting to know the characters at all.
We start with the guy getting rejected, then his parents get married(?), then they tell us the parents had an affair, then the moms in hospital, then he goes off to military, isn't contacted by his crush and then suddenly his crush likes him?
It doesn't make any sense lol
The writing itself is stiff and very lacking in depth.
and u see I can predict what he's going to do next hes going to leave because after all the suffering he caused (in his mind) he's going to say that letting him get married is the most he is going to do.
Dropped, the ml is absolutely unbearable and there's no chemistry between them
WAIT OWEN3, Said something about being surprised Owen 1 hasn't killed him yet and choked him in season
??...!!
Sadly ironic how hearth was punished for a small cut on Shane's arm and in his human life he's punished for his arm being grabbed.
Like father like son I suppose