omg fuck this guy, he sucks. Dan you should start seeing another man to make ur crazy bf jealous a lil bit.
It’s always the stories with the prettiest art style that has the worst plots
So we all agree that there’s nothing but sex? the story feels sooo rushed. Could’ve been better.
was that a death note reference? lmao, there’s already rape on the first chapters plus she’s getting blackmailed for fucking her ugly old ass teacher. not my thing tbh…
Why y’all saying wtf, this is an average yaoi story plus the art is so good. I want more.
right? The beginning was just like Jinx lol
it’s like an average one except it’s also not, it has way less plot than the others and it’s just trash asf…I don’t usually dislike yaoi stories but wtf was this…
Omg no u didn't just compare this shi jinx (-....-")
yes, I did. It’s just rape.
Your wrong and ur right cause it is rape and it's not rape cause kim Dan basically giving Joo his body in return for money for his grandma,that could also count as (cause he selling his body) permission(づ￣ ³￣)づ
But this rape and force...he not getting anything in return and he didn't make a deel nor nothing so is doesn't count as the same...(╯°Д °)╯╧╧
Well, if you put it like that it does make sense.
Everyone criticize this story bc it’s hella toxic but yet we’re all still here bc Jaekhyun is so hot.
Nah most of the bitches here are waiting for his downfall (I'm one of the bitches)
FR tho!
I don’t give a fuck if he’s hot I’m waiting till I see him on his knee begging and crying I hate that mf
the amount of anger I felt when he didn't give shit that Dan was literally bleeding! He even let Dan wipe his own blood off of him....AhHH I wanted to scream.
Nah cause the way I can write a whole essay on Why I hate that shithead is not funny like if it gets worst Idek if his redemption arc is gonna do it atp
He will still end with dan lol
It’s not that he necessarily didn’t care, if you really analyze it he was looking a bit concerned when he noticed how much he had been sleeping nonetheless he was only confused because.. well. Blood was on his arm, if someone randomly was massaging you and a bunch of blood was on your arm after, wouldn’t you be like “what the fuck?” Anyway. Not that I agree with jae, his character is fucking annoying and shitty and I hope there’s some deep explanation as to why he’s such a shit person. I was kinda disappointed when Dan was like “I’m in love with him!” Bitch? For what? For him quite literally raping you? BSBSSBSJ
He did care. The story is a different pov then your hate pov
Bitch where, I'm cracking up. "My hate POV", why is this so hilarious hahaha
He was concerned.. and He had no mouth?
you are good there with the analyzing
However, Dan has been falling for him since chapter 1. How did you miss that?
He was not raping Dan. There is no rape in Jinx, if you analyze it correctly. It is sexual assault and sexual coercion.
No, I am not defending anything. So don't claim that BS it is getting old. I think you need to read the chapters over and try to analyze Jaekyung better. He is toxic and acts like a 14 year old but I think you have missed things. You see he is concerned when the others think he does not care. Maybe you are starting to see things for what they are.
"he looked a bit concerned" isn't gonna cut it tho
I agree with everything else you said!
And I would immediately be concerned and offer help, like bandaging the hands myself (must be difficult to do alone) and ask what happened.
And that's me to a stranger lol
I don't see redemption for him tbh UNLESS he has the most tragic backstory ever but we'll never get it bc author keeps circling between Dan suffering and smut
from how you are acting. I would imagine you walking away from a stranger needing help.
If you are giving an accurate picture of yourself that is your character. Not every one is like and will express it in different ways. You need to be careful of helping strangers with their blood oozing out. STDS.
Jaekyung is different from you and he is more PRIVATE. He has been concerned. He could be asking what happened or what is going on when they are alone at home.
He is an athlete and he is Korean. You have to consider his character and his culture. This is wrote by a Korean with Korean customs.
Name-calling? How immature.
You are "cracking up" because it is true. No it is no hilarious to you. That is said to get a raise out of me or hide yourself. Maybe you got upset.
Trolling tactics.
He is redeemable... but are you?
If you ever get a chance... you may look up things...
IF you are here waiting and craving a downfall then you are bringing to life many instances that will have you to downfall.
https://www.verywellmind.com/how-to-change-negative-thinking-3024843#:~:text=Negative%20thoughts%20are%20sometimes%20referred,esteem%2C%20anxiety%2C%20and%20depression.
Negative thoughts are sometimes referred to as cognitive distortions. These are faulty thinking patterns that can lead to negativity and play a role in causing problems such as poor self-esteem, anxiety, and depression.
negative thoughts and emotions will attract negative experiences.
hoping for someone to fall, which is negative will bring more negative experiences in your life.
he's not fucking real it's not that serious
hoping for someone to fall, which is negative will bring more negative experiences in your life.
You have two irrelevant arguments.
negative thinking is real it does not matter about the subject.
I think self-harm is serious. I think harming others is serious.
I don't buy what you are selling.
Nah mate, I am still here for the side couple.
You sound like an entitled 5 year old with the worst grammar I have ever read, like I can't understand 80% of what you just said, is English your third anguage? Do you even understand your own sentence? lol
You do you, your comments literally got me laughing so thanks for that.
Pls keep replying to me, haven't had such a good laugh in a whole xD
To Chiaki who blocked me. Trolling. Your comments and attacking grammar.
“This is a trick used by debaters when they are losing an argument. The intention is to discredit what the opposition says”.
You are projecting because it is you acting like an entitled 5 year old. If you were mature we would be talking instead of you trolling and using ad hominems.
when ad hominems are used it shows they have no
good arguments and usually sadistic.
Ad hominem: in other words, a personal attack, attacking the person instead of attacking the issue. an example of Ad hominem would be, "poisoning the well" is the direct attack on the trustworthiness of the person making a statement instead of addressing the statement.
Ad hominem refers to attacking the person making the argument rather than addressing the argument itself."
You must not have a very good argument , if all you can do is attack. Disgusting.
But you are saying you lost. Thanks for sharing your lost.
Oh I forgot a comma. And left off the “t” off of not.
Is someone can’t understand my comment which not just my comment but people who writes articles then they are showing English is not their first language or trolling as I said in my last comment. This time is trolling. Pathetic.
Correction after the immature replies I received. Chiaki probably caused them to be bleeding. So Chiaki walks away without helping with a snicker on her face because she hurt them.
“ Everyone criticize this story bc it’s hella toxic but yet ” many are here to spread hate and attack others. There are many hate readers. Some of people here just has read a summary of the story instead of reading the story. Many are just to cause problems and hurt others as seeing with Chiaki
So you attacking me is mature? Okay suit yourself bro, I'm having a good time over here, I'm pretty chill and won't throw a temper tantrum over an argument with a stranger lol
Don't take life so serious especially not a work of fiction like Jinx, must be fun to be around you haha
Also good on you for copying and pasting a definition or a whole site because based on what you are writing, you don't appear to be very intelligent tbh...not meant as an insult, just an observation.
Also no shame in admitting English isn't your first language, it's very clear to see by the mistakes you are making. Don't take insult just bc I pointed that out lol
I have not attacked Chiaki. If Chiaki is saying ", I'm having a good time over here, I'm pretty chill " Since they are trolling and lying it is the opposite. They are upset and they blocked me. This is just to get a raise or degrade me to feel superior about themselves. Pathic trolling tactics.
I am not being so serious. How lame. I don't think this is about Jinx when Chiaki is attacking me and I am the topic. I am not Jinx. I am not a book. I am a real human who is dealing with a cowardly person trolling and gaslighting because they know they are wrong.
"Don't take insult just bc I pointed that out lol" That is trying to cover up the insult because again it is a trick used by debaters when they lose. Look at all the degradation in Chiaki's comments. They only know to attack and degrade others instead of being mature and having a conversation. There is no real conversation with Chiaki. That is sad.
English is my first language. There are not many mistakes
"you don't appear to be very intelligent" ad hominem and it seems they are looking in the mirror. What disgusting and toxic behavior.
"The* amount of anger I felt when he didn't give a * shit that Dan was bleeding! He even let Dan wipe his blood off of him...AhHH I wanted to scream.
leave out "a" and don't need "own" or "literally." Capital the T.
You sound like an entitled 5-year-old* with the worst grammar I have ever read, like I can't understand 80% of what you just said, is English your third language?* Do you even understand your sentence? lol
You do you, your comments got me laughing so thanks for that.
Leave out l for language and still don't need "own" and "literally" and need - for 5 years old.
"I don't see redemption for him to be honest UNLESS he has the most tragic backstory ever but we'll never get it because the author* keeps circling between Dan's* suffering and smut"
to be honest. because. the author, Dan's,
"he looked a bit concerned" isn't gonna cut it though*
I agree with everything else you said!
And I would be concerned and offer help, like bandaging the hands myself (must be difficult to do alone),* and ask what happened.
And that's me to a stranger lol
Removed immediately. added a comma, though.
It seems to be about the same but text language and shorten words.
He did care. The story is a different pov than your hate pov.
Oh my pov should have been POV. That makes the sentence not understandable.. (Roll eyes) I used the wrong than/then. That is a common mistake even for Native English speakers.
He was concerned.. and He had no mouth?
You * are good there with the analyzing ( I needed to capitalize you or that makes the sentence not understandable. roll eyes)
from how you are acting. I would imagine you walking away from a stranger needing help.
If you are giving an accurate picture of yourself that is your character. Not everyone* is like this and will express it in different ways.
This is written by a Korean with Korean customs.*
I forgot this and made everyone two words. I used wrote instead of written.
I needed to proofread again.
These are no signs English is my second or third language.
I was just being lazy and Chiaki is about the same. So it is just pure trolling to feel superior as they degrade others. Disgusting.
These are not signs* why do I do that? oh, my brain was working faster than my fingers. That is common too. I just needed to take time and proofread it again. This is not school. It is a platform that is not to be taken seriously when there are so many trolls here. Trolls that ruin this site.
ok ok… pretty art style, good but predictable plot, everything we need
Right? Perfect in every way akdjsksj