
This story has sooooo much potential. Although i’ve seen the terminally ill troupe many times already, this one definitely has a unique spin to it. I love LOVE the FL, she’s a gem. I totally appreciate that she’s been powerful from the get-go. The ML is pretty nice too! He was a little cold at first but it was obvious from the start it was sorta a miscommunication and his attitude wasn’t ill intended. He definitely wasn’t abusive (the bare minimum lol) like a lot of the fathers in these manwhas tend to be with their kids under the premise of “protecting them”. I’m glad they didn’t drag that out for long and he was able to communicate with the FL about why he was so distant to Claude (the son) and they can work to strengthen their relationship from early.
Ngl, the translations been killing the vibe a little but i still think i have a pretty good grasp on the story outside of the details of the whole two souls things? still need to understand that but properly but hopefully it’ll become more clear as the story goes on. I’m definitely looking forward to future chapters! (crossing my fingers the translation gets better tho lmao)

i was also wondering how this story had such a low rating with only two chapters and being uploaded only today. The person Rabib who made the first comment and gave it a low rating is a troll, they have to be. I just checked their profile and literally all of the mangas and manwhas they have in their read are rated law as hell and it’s literally just random complaints about each one. I refuse to believe that every single manwha they picked up was genuinely that shitty. And honestly there’s plenty trash manwhas on here but there is also a lot of good ones so it’s crazy to me that they haven’t liked anything they read
I hope people don’t judge the story too quickly because of the the rating and give it a proper chance. I know a lot of these manwhas generally are copy and paste but sometimes they put a spin on plots and are actually good so i think we should wait for more chapters before making a judgment call

I know i’ve seen a billion manwha like this that follow the same predictial plot but honestly that’s what i’m kinda feeling for right now. So does anyone have recs similar to this?? By no means does there have to be a supernatural element involved, i’m mostly looking for the generic school looser who no one notices is pretty and has a popular best friend who is secretly a jealous snake storyline :>
The only things i’d like to avoid completely are love triangles over the main girl. i can fw literallly anything else so go crazy!

Although i’m not sure how accurately the manwha is following the novel… from what i’ve read there are a total of 4 love interests (crazy ik) BUT, there are alternate endings where each love interests gets their happy ending with shushu!
Crossing fingers that the manhwa follows the same path but if it does… then you don’t have to worry about your favorite ML getting friend-zoned or heartbroken!!
I hope this spoiler makes your guy’s hearts lighter because it definitely did mine ^^

the pacing of the story is all over the place. and perhaps it’s just the translations but the dialogue sucks too. the story itself doesn’t even seem all that great and possibly predicable too…not to mention both the ML and FL are very boring.
i saw this on tiktok and it looked pretty interesting but this is disappointing so im probably not gonna read this :/

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i was so excited to read the raws for the next chapter that came out today (29) but i’m lowkey disappointed. it just shows what happened from the time Ash grabbed Vivi and ran out the carriage to the he she saw her transformed which is what we see at the end of chapter 28 but the ML’s pov. i mean i don’t understand Korean but i’m guessing he realised how much she meant to him sense he wasted no time in trying to find her and he was all like “there’s so way i wouldn’t recognise you” which was cute and all but we still have to wait to see if ash is okay and what’s gonna happen (〜 ̄△ ̄)〜
i think if a completely different manwha got released with this art style many of us would be apple to appreciate more. Now i am not someone who is new to a change in art style or better yet… an improvement of a manwha’s art style but this…. this looks and FEELS like a complete different manwha. The old art style was so fitting and perfect for the storyline and characters, this change is just so disconnecting.
I will not flame the author or the artists bc i don’t know the circumstances or what caused the artist change, however, i don’t think i’ll be able to get back into this manwha properly which is such a shame bc this was one of the healthiest omegaverses out there <3