This is such a different story line simply because the main isn't the skinny type. I wasn't sure I was going to like the story because of that but the impression he gives off to me is that he is super adorable and cute. His smile is just soo adorable. I feel like he is a big cuddly teady bear. chuckle. Anyways the only negative to the storyline that I see besides the first chapters translation is the mains denseness. Its a little extreme. Oh and I'm am super glad the translation got soo better by the second chapter. I could barely understand the first one. also I am slightly curious if the love interest has a chubby fetish. I keep getting that impression.
I love how detailed your comment is! I agree fully with you on how the first chapter hadn't been fully translated so I still don't understand what the female said in response to getting the recipe.
feels like it needs 20 more pages. ha ha basicly I mean I would love to have a 3rd scenario or even a fourth one. Though honestly in the back of my mind I couldn't help thinking that chichi would be upset by this and that goku would never ever betray her and that their personalities were off but I ignored that. It was cool to see these two be interested in each other.....though when they mentioned bulma I got another twinge since that's the person vegta actually has feelings for.
wowza. I liked the ending mind break scene. I thought the story was over and then it ran right into that. it was downright sexy. Then again I always have a thing for seeing characters losing themselves in pleasure.
i laughed too hard when i read wowza
Does he not remember? Or is he merely acting? Also is it just me or is our main guy planning on returning the horrible favor that was done to him? I honestly don't want to see our main guy mimic the horrible actions of the other guy. Nor do I want him to do the same creepy expressions that made me dislike matthew.
well I don't read about goblins often so I find this really interesting. I'm truly curious what her story is. What really happened to her in the past I wonder.
I really liked the story though I felt the last 2 chapters had a completely different vibe than the first chapter not to mention one thing kept bugging me.........where did the grandma from the beginning go???
same (￣△￣")
oh, is she about to get stalked again??
Seems like it's not just "about" it's already ongoing huhu dude is a creep
you can say that again
you know I thought I would dislike this one since its from a girls perspective but its actually really funny. I wonder if her and the vice chief will end up together or if it will stay bl all the way? Also all the guys look the same to me other than the dumb boy and the boss.
They do!!! Only difference is their hair.
the only thing I don't get is why they are not using their abilities to either find out who she is connected to with the red string or using his arrow to make someone fall for her.
I think those were taken away
so the red strings ability is gone but the string isn't?
okay seriously why are they called tianxia number everything? Is it a ranking or a name?? but other than that I like the story. I really like that she finally ran into number 2. I'm betting he's the love interest.
I'd say it's some sort of ranking
would love it .
Tianxia means under the sky literally. So tianxia no 1 is basically saying they're the number one in existence (under the sky). I'm assuming their world has a ranking system in terms of strength and so she has the title of number "one"