I really like the story I didn't find it confusing at all. It was about a guy trying to save his mafia brother not finding him but realizing they were after info he had which he finds on the girl then goes after said girl and falls in love in the process. For me it was really easy to follow. I didn't find anything wrong with the plot personally and found it enjoyable from beginning to ending well to point i just left off at. Can't wait to find out the main girls background story.
For me I think this had a lot of potential to be a great story but it became more about sex than anything else I also wasn't a fan of the original hunters being the bad guys plot line it was like an attack on soldiers well it felt like it to me based on how they showcased it.
But my biggest pet peeve is that they made that manly goodlooking uke morph when they had sex again later and any time they were in the same scenes his art work dimished. He just stopped looking the same. When he first slept with him his penis was as huge as the semes and the seme had a big one even at that age but later they make it normal size and his body becomes childish. I don't know I thought he looked fine before and I admire mangas that don't feel the need to make a strong uke look weaker when the seme grows up.
But even though I was irritated they did that I still actually liked the story I just think it could have been better.
Its hard to keep up with what's going on with how it's currently being scanned. I wonder if someone will upload different ones that are the full chapters and fix the past ones including the ones with the wrong manga though those ones did make me curious about that manga (something about my daughters the final boss).
But other than that this is a really good story.
That's odd what's with all the chapters after 91 they all seem to be repeats. The actual ending is chapter 91 and it's very obvious it's the ending. I kept Reading hoping for side chapters or extras but it seems to all be repeated chapters. Sad.
But it was a great story but I was curious what happened to the two rival characters in the end. And the ending was a tad rushed but honestly I figured he would do that after he knew for sure she was the one and he didn't want to let her get away. It was sweet and cute.
Ok this leaves me with 2 questions
1 what happened to the bad girls soul they said it was weird she disappeared like that?
2 does the son end up with Fatima? It'd be nice if she got to have someone and I can just imagine how that'd go.
Maybe he'd run all over chasing her and she'd keep rejecting him and then maybe when he's 100 since magicians have longer life spans maybe he'd earn her love though maybe he lives longer than 150 because I imagine his combo would be stronger than his dad. Though less than a dragon sadly but I still want her happy....wonder if another dragon exists?
I can't believe she asked that to funny. (Her comment on dragons taste).
I enjoyed the story but the end seems a bit sped up and for some reason I can't help but feel the author intended her male friend to have a larger part but changed their mind half way through. He suddenly disappeared we saw him occasionally but I was surprised he was so gung ho to pursue her when he found out but didn't try very hard then he says he'll show her his new and improved self at the wedding but then the author skips it and goes straight to the end. But if I ignore his part that seemed over looked well the authors new manger also seems like she should have had a larger part something seems lacking there and the follow up with the ex seemed fast and not much to it. It's extremely weird I'm actually wanting drama but for some reason I feel like another story was intended but the author changed their mind. Does anyone one else feel like that?
Well regardless I liked the story I'd rate it really high though if I could shake that feeling. Thing is this is my second time reading and I still feel that way. It just feels sped up shame.
I wonder why this story is rated so low? Because it was I thought there might be something wrong but the story isn't bad it's a little sadder and might end tragically but it's not bad. All I can think is it's because everyone wants the girl to win the guy and for things to be happy not for her to actively avoid him and try to ruin her past relationship if she has to which I suspect she might have to if she keeps on her current path.
I read some comments and I guess the low ratings are potentially because their perceiving her as weak and stupid? Personally I think it takes a lot of inner strength to resist the one you love in order to save him and your kingdom. I mean that's nobel. Why hate on her for it?
Well then there's the comments about her friend but really she's basing her view point on the novel which showed she was the only one who stayed by her side and remained patient even when she was mistreated. Yeah some might wonder why but honestly it could have just been that she was her friend. Even villains have friends and yeah sometimes that's for personal reasons but a lot of those friends actually stayed by them unlike others. And in her first life I'm pretty sure she said she didn't have as many interactions with her after she got married. She does actually question in her head why her friend spoke like she did. But what seriously do you expect her to mistreat her friend? Why would she? And even now she is trying to give her friend the benefit of the doubt but agrees that it's wrong to hit. Personally I think readers shouldn't be so quick to think the friend is bad. Yeah the author is giving a slight vibe but she just might be jealous or upset over something. What I mean is the servants were wrong and and they did say bad things about her for her situation and even said they disliked her for it and assumed she was bad because of it. Makes sense she got slapped though it's wrong. Also even though it's implied she might have had other reasons for turning down the main character she said it was because people would judge her and she ended up being right. I'm also wondering if maybe her temper was jealousy over her getting close to someone else but yeah she may end up being bad but personally there's no proof and I would think less of the main character for judging her friend without proof and for not being a friend. I think she should listen and give her a chance which I'm willing to bet she will. ( When I say there's no proof I'm referring to her being someone bad beyond the slap for being angry about uncalled for comments).
The main girl is a good character. She is caring and pure in some ways. I don't dislike her personally. And I feel the deep sadness beneath the surface. She's just trying to figure out how to make best of What she's been given. And so she wants to make people happy. I like that. And she loves children and it seems she didn't have one in the previous life and she was a teacher before she was reincarnated so it makes sense she want to help children. It just shows she cares about her people and that's why it hurt so bad that maybe it was all her fault. Seeing them all get hurt and thinking it might have all been because of her. Why hate on her for that?
This heroine isn't vindictive or out to make it all hers she tried that before she now out to save her loved ones and her nation from destruction and honestly maybe it's that change that got her recognized by the god? Maybe the god decided to help because of what happened maybe she sent the little girl to help her well unless the little girl is the god or the previous holy maiden.
Honestly I like her and I hope the story ends happily and not the way she currently hopes. She deserves love as does the ml.
I actually enjoyed the story I admittedly liked the story 10 times more when the translater stopped commenting on every comment it was distracting and broke immersion. My favorite part was the ending moral I think they were trying to get across and I thought the ending was sweet.
Now I do remember needing to read one of the chapters elsewhere because it was missing part of it. I think it 58 or something.