....umm is that the entire story? If so theres not much to this other than psychological torture.
aww that was cute and sweet.....wait aren't I reading yaoi whats up with my description. lol. but really that was really sweet.
That's how it ends??? It seems like a odd ending as if some things were left out maybe its just that there feels like there was way more to the story left unsaid. ha ha not to mention I wonder how his relationship will work out with a machine that looks like elementary kid. will she age? Though I am glad she was able to move in the end. What happened to main guys friend in the end? If they were going to add so much complex story towards the end of the story they should have explained it all better. For most of the story it seemed like a cute romance and then it was hit with action and intrigue. I was kind of shocked by that. but at the same time it was interesting. but........I would have preferred another chapter explaining how their relationship will work now and what will happen with them. like what job will he get now and how will she work....the only thing pooping into my head is an AI that helps you with you daily work or something. but she looks like I kid. dang I'm gonna die of curiosity. I want to know the cute story that follows.
sigh I couldn't help feeling like all the sex scenes in this one are super short. its like their in and then they cum. it was sexy though.
I pretty much liked them all though the last one was a bit bizarre. They all felt short to me and I thought the first deserved more or even its own story.
I was surprised by how sexy they made this....since he looked disturbing and all. I thought it needs a chapter two and maybe a prolog. this one would make a great story. not to mention I wanted to see round two. one round for a sex crazed individual seems odd. though the author apologized for that on page one I think it was.
I really like the story though I feel bad for other guy he just got cheated on. but other than that I really liked the story. wonder when chapter 3 will come out?
I don't think they're n a relationship. It seems more like Akira just loves the MC's big dick. He comes by every few days or weeks for a ride then leaves. If anything it seems like he's n a relationship with the MC's dick not the MC.
How did he cheat he never said they were in a relationship
they more like sex friend than a couple, so no one get cheated here
dang this one needs its on story to. I didn't get enough I wanted to see the sempi fall for him or something.
what do you mean its over?????? that isn't remotely fair. They went through all that and we don't get to see them together afterwards....though the umbrella thing at the end was cute. sigh I wanted more story. I'm sad that was such a great story that had me crying and I feel .....tear you Meany writer I wanted the cute ending chapter of them together. lol I sound stupid. but I mean it its great story. I loved it.