
I enjoyed the story but I thought it would have been even better if the dad found about their relationship and also if the main guys feeling for the dad came out. I just feel like that would have been a better wrap up but I really liked the story anyways. Oh and I also would have like to see the mother and baby.

good story I would like if there was more. Another chapter or two. Also more about that friend that betrayed him would be interesting. They should keep going till the uke admits he's in love. At least I think so.

No I agree I think everyone else to Because the story plot is good it just needs to be longer and have more stops added to make the uke say"I love you"
That last story was so cute I wanted to see his parents faces when he brought back the princess of that country as his bride. It would have been so funny. The last chapter of the 1st story was a tad of a let down though. It was almost as if she was implying she would let the others have him but I doubt that's the case if they actually tried she probably would have killed them. I would have liked to see them get married or even the part when he first came back and met her family. Its a shame they didn't show that part I bet it would have been really interesting.