i like this but i’m getting too much backstory and not enough present day. the back stories and sex scenes could’ve easily been condensed into a couple chapters not the 20+ that they are. this may sound rude but i wanna see the baby. i like the backstory but we’re getting too much of it at one it feels like it’s overtaken the main plot line also the dude with the class prez is an asshole
i read spoilers and i will be dropping this
okay so basically arjen becomes irrelevant to the story and arien becomes the mc and it focuses solely on her. arjen will basically give all of his power to arien to protect her and because of that he loses his connection with jason which is infuriating because he really loved his powers and was so connected with jason. but because of this arien will grow up to be like super op and arjen will become a knight but we rarely see arjen he’s been forced out of the spotlight. he takes a backseat to a character that isn’t even that likeable in the first place like arien’s character is so flat and boring it’s ridiculous. like there’s nothing about her character that makes me go “she’s a great character”









raws?