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I don’t plan on finishing this but someone has to say it. There’s no way in hell I’m getting forced to marry someone with a Willy Wonka haircut. I deadass cannot take him seriously because stiff where? He really out here making threats when he got a bob…with a bang…

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This story is a good example of how making a story too fast paced can be detrimental to the plot.

How I would’ve went about it is, introduce the MC and show that she’s been abused and how she’s trying to break free. It’s not like she had friends in her previous life from what we saw, so her buddying up with her roommates so quickly was odd to me. The author could’ve made a little tension upon them first meeting especially with her unique hair color. Her roommates are hesitant to get to know her. Not mean but hesitant. Maybe the MC sticks up for the commoner girl because she understands what it’s like to be outcasted. Boom, they see that she’s an alright person and start to form a friendship.
I always hate that the guy that I want to be the ML is never the ML. I know authors do this shit on purpose because shaggy brown haired guy would’ve been *chefs kiss*.
The author is making everything fast paced EXCEPT for the MCs personality. MC is not interesting. She’s strong but no one really knows that. Like someone else mentioned, being humble can come off as insincerity. I’m annoyed at her hiding her powers. One of the tropes I hate. “I can’t let anyone know how skilled or strong I am so I stay out of the spotlight.” And then something happens where they’re forced to show their skills and now EVERYONE and they mama knows how strong they are now. Doing all that hiding just to have your powers exposed in an anticlimactic scene. Okay. I’m done.

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I’m dropping this. I don’t like anyone.
The MC is fine. I just don’t quite understand what her goals are. I’m chalking that up mostly due to the bad translation (thank you to the translators nonetheless!). The crown prince is weird as fuck. The pope is weird as fuck. The crown princes brother is weird as fuck.
I’m going to assume the pope is the ML but I don’t feel nothing.
The MCs family is dope as hell. 10/10 would want them to adopt me.
There’s just no chemistry with any of the characters. I just…no. I usually love stories like this too. I was sad to not enjoy it.

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I want to hear y’all’s theories! Do you think he’s on some federal undercover shit or some scheming gangster shit?
When Shin was having his little monologue, I was like, “don’t tell me this motherfucker is a cop.” Honestly, both theories could make perfect sense!

I love that we’re seeing more of how they do care for each other through body language and actions but it’s unspoken. S3 is going to be spectacular and the waiting is going to kill me.

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