I see some people in the comments defending the lack of progress and saying some people just want the romance/smut but atp I’ve seen no one asking for smut other than a few asking for kissing. Which is understandable. They’re still coming out though so that’s something. There’s stuff the story can dive into but it either hasn’t or has no interest in doing so. There’s no excuse for the lack of progress :/ there’s been enough chapters to start getting into that stuff.
Of course we all want a story full of depth and nuance, but length doesn’t equal either of those automatically. We’ve been going at an incredibly slow pace with not enough to support it all. It feels stretches and diluted. Is short and overly-concentrated better? No. But most popular writers/stories can hit a decent in-between spot. I think it’s understandable that people are complaining. We are complaining because we care about this. Most (constructive) critics aren’t hate reading.
I’ve kind of grown disinterested by this. I feel like we haven’t really done much throughout this story? I could be misremembering though. I don’t find Maythan amusing anymore either I think I’m gonna drop this :(
It’s so out of nowhere no way that’s the end. I thought there was going to be royalty drama and evil plots to thwart. I thought we’d see them beginning to date and enjoy different experiences. I thought we’d see them grow, yet we get this “ending” girl wtf
What the fuck happened to the art in this latest chapter??? I can’t be the only one seeing this.
Has the art always been like this? I can’t tell. I just looked at the first couple of chapters to check but idk.
Please…. PLEASE… no harem, no romance, no sexual tension. I’m so disappointed after reading the spoilers like wtf :( ofc they are making it so female characters aren’t very well written and they all like the mc. shoot me. I’m gonna birdbox myself by banging my head against a wall until I die.
That’s the ending? That chapter? Wtf also, he’s a stalker. Thanks for telling us that AT THE END
I just reread it and these are my thoughts.
I’m assuming most people disagree but please keep your mind open
I feel like they need to make Maythan a bit more likable. HEAR ME OUT ಠ_ಠ He always acts a lil irritable and selfish. I like him, I’m rooting for him, but sometimes I’m just thinking “pls get serious rn maythanstop acting like a child” He has his sweet moments, like we just saw, but it doesn’t feel like he actually cares. Sometimes the people around him are being serious and he’s acting goofy “oh god why is he confessing to me now??! I have a pizza in the oven!” Type of scenarios. While to other characters this is an incredibly important thing. Also, a lot of the characters are incredibly devoted to him when he’s barely done anything. Or rather how he’s acted/his actions aren’t the type of thing to warrant this kind of love and devotion.(in my opinion)It’s stretching the believability for the drama a little bit for me. Comedy is put right into the dramatic moments so it’s kind of hard to really feel the emotions of it. :/ He treats the people around him in a weird way. Idk I’m just kind of getting whiplash from the amount of times they cut to him being serious to “quirky” in the middle of a serious moment
We have our lesbian couple now we need to make the gay one cannon LETS MAKE IT HAPPEN !!!!