I read all 3 Love triangle Books backwards. Hahaha. But this one was nice. The romance wasn't awkward. However, the ending when the President fired her felt hurried like he left in a hurry, I would have liked if he said it in a more slow paced, and made the two brothers reconcile or fix misunderstandings. Cause it was awkward when he said he'll fire her as a marriage gift and give more later when they do get married.
This story was decent. The plot was nice, wasn't hurried. The typical "I didn't noticed I liked her way before" plots. I would have liked it better if the girl had left after telling the guy she gave up on him and made the guy run after her. So that there's more scenes of the guy showing he likes the girl. More drama!! I just find kissing her and saying you love her isn't enough for me. You gotta show it! ACT on it!
The plot is not bad. However!! I feel like the main couple's relationship wasn't developed enough, I wasn't convinced that the FL likes him. The 1st Princes' feelings, as well as the ML Princes' feelings for the FL were more realistic than the FL's feelings. She's fake!
Her interest with business gave her the "who do you love more? Your work or me" vibe.
So when the ML got into an accident, it gave the FL an opportunity to redeem herself and prove that she likes the ML. But actually she doesn't like the ML because the 1st prince even asked her that if he never gave her the reassurance that she won't lose her business relationship with him would she be unable to say "No" to his advances (basically can she say NO to sleeping with him).
She didn't give a definite answer.
Which shows that she loves work than love. If she loves the ML, she would have used him as reason to say NO. That's why most people (including, me) felt the ending was too rushed. Since it wasn't believable enough.
Conspiracy theory!!
If you think further enough. What if the FL knew from the very beginning that the ML was a prince from a large and old kingdom. So from the very beginning she has been trying to win him to create a beneficial business relationship. He has been very stagnant, nothing has been changing and is just reading books. But she didn't find any faults with him reading books because knowledge is Power. She learned from him too and vise versa.
Later met the 1st prince, and took the opportunity to try and win the 1st prince, but just as a business partner. But that doesn't mean she's not willing to use her body. But the ML who she was aiming from the beginning got hurt, she of course runs after him. (There was never any plans to aim for the 1st prince, his country is small, she just wants business relationship since they have a really good tourism business). She was just showing concern than love, since she almost lost a potential business partner. Got shot, again almost lost him. He didn't even said he'll take her with him, she forced herself into him. She used her knowledge to help build his country but use it as a way to marry him. Earning a big business, as well as a huge and booming country. Everything was planned out. Who knows she may have planned the attack, too. ╮( ̄▽ ̄)╭
It's nice. I find the ML attractive, nice art. I got a little upset when they blamed the FL for not having a boyfriend or a husband to take care of her, I thought that was dumb. I never had a problem reading Harley Quinn stories since I read them knowing the fact that they'll be cheesy as hell. I enjoy stories where "the man runs for the girl or the man loses the girl then gets them in the end" shit. But the problem with this is that the moment the girl was trying to run away from the guy was dumb. I thought the guy was being sincere there. He promised her he would bring her back with him and marry her, I thought that was pretty good. He explained and proved to her he loves her. Great! But the girl was finding non-existent faults, unless you don't like the guy. Then she later runs after the guy after finding out she's pregnant with his baby, stating that she "finally understand why he went to America, and she want her child to know it's father". So you selfishly run to the guy cause you found out you have his child without thinking about the fact that you brutally rejected the guy. (Are you after his money to help take care of the child?) I just find the girl as selfish and insensitive. But still a good read.
I read quite alot of plots like these and there are alot of Side Hoes and Side Bitches. Since I don't see any antagonistic bitches trying to go between the Main couple, I feel like I'm taking a break. Their problem also isn't a big deal, it's rather annoying tbh. I like Serena since she's the type to be "one of the guys" with the Duke, but the MC just suck at this relationship. Especially, the Duke. The FL's actions is understandable but I do hope she'll calm her tits soon. Now I'm craving a romance story where it's just fluff. No drama, just fluff.
Since I don't see any antagonistic bitches trying to go between the Main couple. Their problem also isn't a big deal, it's rather annoying tbh. I like Serena since she's the type to be "one of the guys" with the Duke, but the MC just suck at this relationship. Especially, the Duke. The FL's actions is understandable but I do hope she'll calm her tits soon. Now I'm craving a romance story where it's just fluff. No drama, just fluff.
I just see it as the FL having trauma in this world that she really can’t go back from. She is a normal and realistic character because she feels awkward around her family bc it’s not really hers, and imagine starting a new life and having some crazy guy tell u you’re gonna amount to Nothing basically... I’d be horrified lol maybe I wouldn’t take the weak route but it’s not like I don’t understand why she did.










...was a little disappointing. Not only because we didn't get to see how she got her happy ending, but because the sister was happy. I don't like REAL villainess being happy, their demise is my pure bliss. So this chapter needs a continuation, where we see her happy ending and the sister (including the cheating prince) gets a horrible ending.