
First of all, thank you so much for your hard work. It’s amazing to be able to read this here but
If it’s okay I’d like to volunteer to proofread. I noticed a lot of spelling mistakes or the way the phrases are worded make it even harder to understand the plot because they don’t make sense- with a proofreader helping you (whoever you choose) you can become even better as a group and it also helps a ton to make sense of the story. (I also speak speak some Korean)
At first I thought the story wasn’t written very well, but with your new translator doing such an amazing job too along you guys, it seems to be more of a proof reading issue. I don’t mean to criticize your work at all, I’m thankful but I feel like this would let us all enjoy the story 100 times more!

You guys are tripping, if you want to be so mad at somebody be mad at Param- he’s the one that keeps saying that he’s not dating anybody and keeps letting Han make advances.
Mr. Han has done nothing wrong he’s literally just flirting with somebody he’s interested in after confirming he isn’t dating anybody and who seems to be receptive to his advances. He broke up with the person he was saying for Paramand he hasn’t done anything bad to Param JESUS
You need to get off of Hwi’s Dick (╬ ̄皿 ̄)凸

Oh you mean the part where to adults were having consensual sex?? He literally broke up with him right after that because he noticed that he was bothered but how Come you’re not mentioning the fact that Hwi literally took advantage of a drunk Param the first time they met him- After purposely bumping him so hard he fell and sprained his ankle too- or the fact that he said that he was happy that he could now toy with him all he wanted

STFU STFU STFU HAN IS TRASH AND HE WASN'T EVEN DATING THAT GUY BUT WAS JUST SLEEPING W HIM AND FREAKING WANTED HIM TO FREAKING LOOK MORE LIKE PARAM AND LITERALLY TOLD HIM TO GET RID OF HIS PIERCINGS WTF AND IF PARAM HATED HWI SLEEPING W HIM HE WOULDN'T ACT THAT WAY AROUND HIM PLUS HWI GOT A CHARACHTER DEVELOPMENT UNLIKE HAN AND YES PARAM IS DUMB BUT SO IS HAN'S UGLY ASS

He literally had consensual sex with the other person and stipulated that he didn't want any relationship with him, he was literally a fuck buddy, there is absolutely no problem to imagine someone else while you're fucking a simple fuck buddy. But whatever I'm saying I feel like you'll not care at all because, seing your previous reaction, u don't look like someone mature enough with whom I can have this conversation

lmao have u ever had a sex buddy ? He's not his lover, there is no feelings involved, it's just sex. So there is absolutely no problem with the fact that he's thinking about someone else while fucking him. If the other doesn't like the way he's treated, he could literally leave. Han told him that there wouldn't be any romance between them, so he can only blame himself for expecting things on his own when Han had been clear since the very beginning.

lmao you're totally fucking right about that fam, but it doesn't change my point. Han had been very honest since the beginning so we shouldn't blame him for thinking about someone else or not returning his fuckbuddy's feelings. Being selfish with someone that you have absolutely no feelings for doesn't mean that you'll be selfish with the one you love. I mean, I totally ship Param and Hwi, but the hatred towards Han is way too much and for literally nothing. Yes he's suspicious but some of you paint him as the evil when he hasn't actually done anything against Param so ╮( ̄▽ ̄)╭

Exactly !!! This is so damn true!! If the readers had known about Han's point of view from the start, they would have known that their feelings were mutual from the very beginning and everyone would be hating on Hwi for getting in the way of those two guys who're mutually attracted to each other lmao

I really thought it was going to be some bullshit story about how the seme knew th3 uke from his childhood and was using the sister to get to him and meet him again but oh my God the real reason was amazing...but then from then on it just went downhill, so predictable, honestly I wouldn’t even be surprised if he turned himself into the police into some lame redemption attempt.
And honestly how naïve can someone be. All he does is complain about how the sister is fake which granted the sister was kind of shitty to him but he literally knew he was in love with the guy, still went out with him, got played by him and still went looking for him with no other reason then wanting to see him
Ever since they used the charm on taegyu and he saw Jiho I’ve been waiting for this (๑•ㅂ•)و✧
Lol I know it was blurry but who else could it be... satan’s son? Nope
Wait when did the charm happen?
When he wouldn't let ingyu leave to see kangin and taegyu decided to drag ingyu back into the devil world and in order to get away from him ingyu put a charm on him and left him there to suffer from it's effects, and after he was able to walk again and started lookin for ingyu he ran into jiho.
I forgot which chapter it was but it was somewhere kinda in the middle cuz I think it was right before we learned the boss was an angel.
Ohhh! I remember now, thanks! (=・ω・=)