
Okay. I love Minhyuk so much because he is cute and fluffy even though he is so much gullible. But every update, I got irritated by those people around and on him also (I mean, sometimes, cause it's negotiable).
I don't know why he is so much into trusting those people. Like, I get it. You have a quest that requires a partner. But to incorporate yourself to the problem of that guy.
Oh good grief. I'm gonna spank your ass, Minhyuk.
Lol. Sorry for this. I just vented out my frustrations.

Okay. The story was good, even though I don't want to have a romantic scene on an adventure-fantasy story. There is a lot of people like me, who doesn't want to incorporate adventure-fantasy genre to romantic genre.
It is because of the flow of the storyline.
If you're writing a story regardless of what genre is that. You must stick to the flow of the plot because one sudden turn can entirely change the whole point of your story.
And also, side dish romance is not bad but to overpower the main genre (for example: adventure-fantasy) is a mistake. That's a no-no.

That's cuz they don't know how to write it properly. Either the Mc turns into a lovefool doing everything with the Fl in mind or gets an harem that only serves as foil, comic relief and fanservice...
Honestly the only harem where the women are actually useful and not almost totally dependent on Mc is Re:Monster. At least a couple of them are really strong... xD
WHY THE HELL DID Y'ALL ENTER THE DOUBLE DUNGEON? DID JINWOO WARNED ALL OF YOU? DAMN.