Felt like Dominic was just an unnecessary addition, I didn't really enjoy watching winter getting cucked like 10000 times and barely batting an eye to it. Either they could've removed Dominic from the story completely or the entire basement situation could've been deleted. But when you mesh these 2 very different settings together with such a versatile ending it doesn't seem harmonious
I wanted to see Dominic's bad ending fr
This shit shouldve ended in the basement or sm.. everything after Raymond running away felt so unnecessary, it was so much more thrilling and there was an actual sense of dread/intrigue when he was stuck in that basement and not outside
Yuda deserved way better, the dad's ending was boring and could've been 100x better.
that time skip was stupid. We see no actual improvements in either persons maturity since they still end up having the simple minded dialogue from 10 years ago.
Personally I stuck along because I expected yohan to be more possessive and psychotic regarding mc, but besides the first few chapters of him stalking her most of it was pretty tame. His photographic memory could've been expanded on much more, but the author likes to brush it off as an excuse for why he's better than his brother, rather than actually using it for complete character development. the only time we see it actually impacting him is when he asks his dad to erase his memories since they're so much more vivid and strong, but we never see that hint of depth ever again.
Imo this whole manwha is wasted potential, and daejongs involvement was brushed over in like 3 panels. We still don't know why he made each son have the opposite duty regarding her, if he wanted to see emotions out of them, just a simple protect vs. murder feels really stupid and childish for a man who's one of the best psychiatrists in the country who also has photographic memory. There could've been much more better psychological "games" that evoked much stronger and observable emotions that he could've planned with them that wouldn't waste 10 whole years of everyone's life.
Lowkey just want more lore drops and not smut it's too bad I found this manwha so early, now I'm too invested to drop so I'll have to wait every month for just 1 chapter
FUCK THE SECOND HAND EMBARRASSMENT IS KILLING ME LMFAO HOW DO U GUYS GET THRU THIS. I get the plot has to start somehow but I canttttt
How is hayan losing? Who is she even fighting? Deokjoo is nowhere near on the same level as her but they are both tired, fighting on the same line against basic goons. Feels a little rushed, I was hoping to see hayan do something crazy with her magic again
My assumption is
Jin Qing send people who is actually capable against hayan
Or
Hayan is exhausted as she had to keep defending everyone with her magic since everyone doesn't help much against Jin qing's soldiers
These type of crack manwhas only work with a full, official translation. It's so insanely hard to follow w/ Google translate that it's not even worth reading at all, feels like my brain is literally squeezing itself dry trying to understand this translation.
Or at least tweak the works to fit the theme of the story instead of just coping off of google translate
Did winter sell his body to the weirdos wife? Which is why he said "my wife missed you a lot... She'd be sad to see you got bigger" guess she had a thing for little boys. And in exchange for that service, winter made a deal w him to potentially protect Raymond somehow?
Oop, here i was thinking she would be sad coz hes more attractive as a buffer guy so its sad she cant see him anymore, but I forgot he was pretty young in the beginning ╥﹏╥
Yeah probably with the setting it no suprised if the two weirdos actually in marriage relationship to keep doing their weirdos shit
Omg pls be a yandere I'm so tired of the overused hayan crashout shit, feels like a plot device and not an actual yandere
You think he's yandere? I thought he got gang beaten by those guys