It was definitely rushed starting from chapter 70-100
Still this was such a good read, I normally hate romance and action found in a story but I wasn't cheesing at all and their connection/progression of their relationship didn't feel forced everything just feels so genuine and I think this is what's lacking to some romance stories now.
The action part I would've loved more build up or like make her struggle a little more so that her achievements/leveling up could be more "fruitful" rather than simply having an insane ass luck
But overall I was very satisfied hoping for a sequel
Her patience is WILLLLLD if I were her I would've burn the entire area to dust
Yes go girl get them dicks and don't you ever settle with them they'll ruin your lovely genes
No but I need a separate story of uncle a and fluffy pslspslspsls
Aiyan may be a psycho but this boi yearns
YEARNERS ON TOP of me please...
It's so nice how the child literally thinks like a child though sometimes she can be somewhat be very "aware" but overall she literally has the curiosity and a spongelike brain a child is supposed to have
Idk bro I guess I could say it was cute
Bottom could've shown like he uhm fuck it can't even find the words
Anyways there are "someee" parts I did like about this but yeah overall I can say on a deeper level the top seems to be just craving for love and the bottom is the only one there who he thinks could give him that love he's been craving
I can say it does have a potential on the first 2 chapters if the author could've added more spice to it or like giving them like a deeper connection