LET'S FRICKIN GOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO
1- I gotta say it y'all...I don't agree with a lot of y'all's opinion of the commander because I think he simply doesn't have to emotional intelligence/maturity to know why Yu is still hurt
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He is aware of what he did, but confused as to why Yu is so hung up about the fact that he rejected and threw him out.
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He wanted You to constantly be at his feet, depend on him because power, blah blah, basically he's delusional and doesn't know it
2- GET IT YU!! STAND YOUR GROUND!! I'M SO SO PROUD HOW FAR HE'S COME!!....author..I've got my eye on you
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And honestly, of this ends without them as a couple...idc I'm still partying about Yu's strength, tenacity and ability to stand up for himself, and while she lived, his mother as well.
HOL UP WAIT A MINUTE SIR
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...chaps, it's a no from me. Just why- he could of kissed her forehead for all I care. Ended a smut with fluff! But nope, author went 1000mph straight to rape. This ain't it fam
Fyi, I know it wasn't explicit in whether he raped her or not - the issue is that he took advantage of her unconscious state.
Yes. Berk vibes. Also satisfies my unholy love of gore and action.
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2 - what the what was chapter 3's bad guy...bad "guy"?? Like the leader of the bandits..I don't want an answer for this but I'm making my confusion clear
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3 - 'sus'... really...sus?? Suspicious, weird, uncanny or even unnatural.
this may (well it is) just be me, being picky but there's a certain level of slang lingo that you can put in a translation without it taking the reader out of immersion or it just coming across as, dare I say, straight cringe. For me that ain't it but I'm still hooked and looking forward to see what comes next.
r.i.p. Yu's mama you deserved much more than what fate gave you in this story
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I was actually hoping they'd be reunited but, clearly this story as an affinity towards dead women, even the morally good ones.
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- oop, that's a eulogy with a sprinkle of my own opinion right there! (. ❛ ᴗ ❛.)
Me: *sees a new romance on CHP 1*
"Step on the gas..."
*cute art, protagonist with a backbone; if a lil quirky*
"Step on the gas"
*the last panel of CHP 1*
"Step on brakes!! ಠ_ಠ"