Yellowcanary's Topics (194)

If I had to say something positive about this story, it would be the fact that I love all the children in their relationship with each other and even the potential relationship to use even though they’re six years old, because like kid relationships are cute as long as you know not to take them seriously and force them for something they’re clearly not ready for and the fact that ultimately four families were able to be brought together in a way that didn’t get to insane in the MC first family who late husband’s brother still calls him brother-in-law which I think is extremely sweet and I’m glad they didn’t corrupt that and then in the three other families, including ML New best friend son, who seemingly is going to marry into the family

Yukio’s character song should be hiss by Megan Thee Stallion

I hope this epilogue shows Cliff’s ending and I don’t care. I hope he somehow his own form of happiness like how he was supposed to in the book

I’m actually so glad he’s getting with someone like it was getting so bad. I thought I was going to have to start shipping him with his cousin I generally don’t know how I feel about the two of them together but they both deserve nice things after kinda being whipping boys.

Additionally, I think the 29-year-olds should fuck each other

I genuinely think this is the moment where we’re gonna see character development from him simply because this is the first time he specifically been reprimanded from aoki who’s opinion means more than the world to him. Hopefully he’s able to start moving more aware of the world without losing the thing that makes him him.

So like what the fuck is happening with ceasar like is he getting redeemed because the author seems to be fairly sympathetic towards him while stating that he’s not going to end up with her so like wtf is happening

Everyone’s like “go Oleg and be the hero” like y’all he’s about to be beaten to an inch with in his life. Do you guys not understand the danger this child is in because no one gives a fuck about him. Like the tonal dissonant is so crazy to me.

So finally finishing this I think the emperor is a fucking liar. He says he was always going to give the throne to Raymond. He’s fucking lying even with the revelation that the reason why she had to be the emperor is because only she had the ability to fix magic is ultimately pointless because they don’t have magic to fix (at the point) which is one of the reasons why he was disappointed with his grandson.

Also, it’s really fucking insane to try and match make two people when one of them desperately doesn’t wanna be with the other one and then to hold something over the other person’s head to try and make it seem better. I know in the end they go over how the emperor was actually a bad person and was really selfish because his whole thoughts were only on maintaining the royal family, but I don’t think they went into him enough. He says he raised Raymond would love but we don’t see that. We see he raised his other grandchild with love but we don’t see him raising Raymond with love. However, we do see them being brotherly until a certain point. I genuinely believe that point comes when Raymond realizes that he is the unfavored child. Jealousy and envy can make you an ugly person and I think is demonstrated here. I understand why Serena turned on the crown prince however, your family being exiled permanently and you being sent to a convent to die can’t be better than just dying.

I would love to hear about literally anything else in the side story like what happened to the emperor what happened to Raymond? What happened to Serena? What happened to the second male lead because it’s been 10 years, but we don’t find out any of that which is kind of disappointing.

I do think for what it is the story is at least thought-provoking when you think about the main villain, however, I do wish he would’ve genuinely had his villainous breakdown when he was poisoning the male lead and really dive into his emotions of jealousy, resentment, and envy which I think could be solved by the second male lead, but I digress

So coming back to this and thinking objectively I am actually kind of mad. They changed the ending simply because Erica being the secret smarter twin would give her something while she currently has nothing. Laurencia currently has two things, Intelligence and love. Erica currently has nothing. In the original ending, L would end in love and somewhat intelligence because the spy not being the prodigy twin, she still genuinely smart, which would go to show that the grandfather was wrong to begin with. E would end up with her intelligence as her relationship is a nothing burger. Both of them would end up with something.

In the new ending, L has both of them. E has genuinely nothing and the grandfather despite being cruel was right. I don’t think the grandfather at any point should be proven right. Now she is off doing God knows what trying to help the alchemist however, how can she help the alchemist if she’s actually not as intelligent and what they need is intelligence. No point in time does the story prove that she’s just people smart not booksmart because she doesn’t interact with people and her main power comes from the fact that she aligned herself with people who took care of situations for her.

In the act of trying to make L look better, they weakened another character and I don’t see how they’re going to be able to build her back up and I think that’s bad writing. She’s not physically strong, she’s not intelligent in a noticeable way in regards to academics or understanding people, she is somewhat cunning however, she’s now a good guy so she’s not going to be able to display it, she is empathetic, but not overly so. One of her main character traits was her insecurity, but in healing her trauma somewhat and lessen that she has developed into a worse character, a character with nothing going on. She is a character dependent on men when originally she wasn’t. That is God awful writing, and unless they give her a fucking gun or something I don’t see how they’re gonna fix it.

Actually, completely forgot there’s magic in this world so I think the only thing they would be able to give her would be a magic. If she somehow became a magic user that would give her a unique enough identity while also having strength that doesn’t come from a man allowing her to stand on her own. Additionally, she could be taught alchemy from the alchemist after hoping them, which could be symbolic of how once she hurt them and now she is one of them, however it seems to be something you’re born into and a semi closed practice as well they don’t make it clear if it needs academic intelligence like other forms of alchemy so it’s a good B option.

Additionally, just so people are clear the reason why I don’t count Erica‘s relationship with the red hair guy as something valid is because only at chapter 80 which is the season two finale is their relationship at a point to barely start the beginning of something possibly real because before that, he was her warden. It didn’t matter if he genuinely cared for her because above all else, he would report on Erica‘s movements to her sister putting him in a position of power over her. I understand how him being in constant contact with her would make him protective over her, especially if she is known to hurt herself physically, and emotionally which he comes to do. However, she would not start having feelings for him because despite being a delusional person, she is not so delusional to develop Stockholm syndrome. Now that they’re more high than even playing ground and he has changed from her warden to her knight could something happen but I still don’t expect it to develop well as you can count their interactions before hand on a single hand so

I think the villains here were interesting however I think if they really wanted to show rugal having sex with someone they should have showed him fucking angel because it’s despite him saying he was in love with the main character. It really did feel like he was just projecting his feelings of angel onto the main character which really plays into the tragedy of his character, and how all of his failures are truly his fault.

The secondary villain, however I think is a bit more interesting due to the fact, he is the son of the primary villain, but like unloved by everyone except the detective. Despite having the very last scene of the series he doesn’t show up for like most of the second season, which is crazy. I think, especially if you’re going to play it where he gets a redemption plus I think it’s crazy for the main villain to have another confrontation with the main characters, but the secondary villain doesn’t have a confrontation with the secondary characters, especially if you wanna play into that contrast/similarity of both father and son kind of having an implied redemption, but like I think it could’ve been better honestly especially again if you’re playing into how the reason why they lost is because they were ultimately alone