
And holy shit it does!! EXTREME Spoilers BELOW
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So uke gets taken to the parallel dream world and has a bunch of sex with dream seme until he tries to run away but is lured back. Someone in the band is in on it i think, theres a mysterious cloaked man. Then real seme somehow gets dragged to dream world and the first thing he decides to do is fuck the uke and so all three of them have a 3sum WITH DOUBLE PENETRATION, (yes seme his parallel and uke) then uke and og seme try to run and seme gets STABBED by dream seme and uke leaves him to run and pushes dream seme off a cliff and jumps with him to wake up, and seme woke up too from being stabbed and then they act like NOTHING HAPPENED and everyone is all normal…… they might be dating now who knoes

Saw this on Lezhin and came here to ask yall is this good ?

It contains nonconsensual sex.. and it lacks communication between the couple which is irritating to the point of giving up.. plus the seme is the bully at first so the relationship is kinda not so okay for many readers to read, like maybe some have traumatic experience with bullying and stuff so.. oh also seme is so possessive so dominating and uke doesn't have his mind set to have his own preference about relationships..ho just goes whatever his bf wants him to do..
Why is this all over the place in the later half of the story the dissapearing english teacher, the random time skips, no ski?? Everything is a mess lmaoo and ur right the art gets worse. I do enjoy it still its just getting sloppy