I read the title as “Kingdom of Farts” and wondered what kind of weird fetish story would be given such a high rating until I squinted more to see the correct spelling.
Aside from that, it’s a good start! The FL (Sana) is timid right now, but she’s trying to build confidence and that’s great. I’m looking forward to reading more. (๑•ㅂ•)و✧
*The Marriage of Farts
Whoops, even got the title wrong. Lol
I laughed louder than i should have
Laugh away! (⌒▽⌒)
This is going to backfire. My face is in my pillow already! It’s hard to bear this cringe because the guy is such a dummy. Why did he think this would work??
Well, we all knew that white-haired bitch was sick in the head. Chapter 6 proves it. Having sex with slaves in the same room as your own son?? EW, GROSS.
Yamagishi won't be seeing Shuri ever again and he'll have no idea what happened to his best friend. That's a horrible feeling. ╥﹏╥
To Hyuk: Seriously, maybe YOU should’ve quit acting like a little bitch and confessed sooner! You’re acting exactly like a jealous loser and just as childish as you consider Yeonwoo.
Gosh, I’m so irritated. I wanna smack that Hyuk across the city and pummel him into the graveyard. Get the hell away from our sweet beans! (╯°Д °)╯╧╧ (╬￣皿￣)凸
At least Yeonwoo has a valid justification for the way he acts around/with Hwibum, although it’s obvious he needs to open up and communicate with his boyfriend. That might still take some time based on his separation anxiety and the anxiety he feels around that jealous loser.
I get it, honestly. I'd feel the exact same way as her if I was dating as I'm older with zero dating experience on a personal level. ╮(￣▽￣)╭ I think I'll enjoy this one!
Let’s be honest here. If you’ve gotten to chapter 46, we all know that both of these main characters have troubled pasts—the ML more so than the FL, of course.
The ML does not know how to communicate his thoughts and emotions, mainly because of his fucked up background and the subsequent years following his r*pe as a child by a man (and likely when he was older by both men and women). All he knew were beatings, extortion, and sex. He was never allowed the chance to be a child and grow up like other people, so thus he’s not able to verbally communicate what he wants without the fear of being hated and abandoned. So, he remains silent.
Of course, this leads to miscommunication and a hell of a lot of angst (adding to my already painful migraine). (￣∇￣")
The FL has her own host of issues. In the story, she has admitted to being hedonistic and shallow. Just like the ML, she’s afraid of the consequences of her choices—of losing someone she’s close to in case she loses herself again in the process.
The very start of their relationship began with sex (that would feel good to the ML). Don’t complain that’s all this relationship is when it started out that way. It seems like the only way the ML feels he can communicate is through sex because he knows the FL enjoys it with him as he does with her. It’s not the best way to communicate, but his expressions become the window to his feelings whenever they’re wrapped up in each other’s arms.
My hope is that the ML will be honest with the FL about his past, his thoughts, and especially his desires. I feel like that will be coming much later, but the FL has to do her part to help draw that out of him. She needs to reassure him that she cherishes him (it’s obvious to us) because he has no idea what she’s thinking.
Honestly, just please end the angst soon! I find this story so fascinating and interesting on a psychological level, mainly because I know people like these ones do exist in the real world. I’m really looking forward to the rest of this story.
(I wrote this comment in hopes that like-minded people would band together to protect the baby bean of the troubled ML and his beloved who needs to hurry up and spill the beans about her desire to keep him close. (▰˘◡˘▰))
I was so with you until you called the ml a baby bean.. he definetly needs some sort of comfort and help but gurrrr- (ಠ_ಠ)
He’s not an actual baby, of course, and he does need protection in some ways. I was seeing a lot of hate (like a LOT) in the comments towards the ML when I wrote this, so the “protection of the.baby bean” was really in regards to the people who just couldn’t understand his background and point of view.
I get what your saying but it’s just me getting the ick of people calling grown men babies after surviving the 2018 bts craze
Honestly, I never knew that. I picked up the “baby bean” terminology from readers of my stories in the past when they would want to protect my cute characters. Maybe they were BTS fans (and probably still are), haha.
Am I the only one who wants Ellen to use her powers more? She sort of feels like a background character at times—not even a side character—even though she’s the FL. I’m kind of disappointed with Ellen’s impact on the story despite it supposedly being her own. Sure, she has some cool powers, but she rarely makes use of them and the story tends to go stale.
I have read plenty of stories with genres like this one, but I feel like this isn’t done as tastefully as most of those. I have just read chapter 67 and I’ve been reading this story since it first started being uploaded on here, so I feel like I should have a decent grasp of the story, its flow, and the way the characters interact.
In my opinion, the plot could have been much better written to make a more impactful story. I know many of the characters are flawed on purpose, but there are so many issues that haven’t been addressed (and probably never will be). It’s disappointing, mainly because I kept hoping for the story to get better and just more problems keep stacking up as time goes on.
I think I have to bow out on this one. (T﹏T) Good luck to everyone still reading this manga! I really, really hope it improves…