╮( ̄▽ ̄)╭ I read it all at once for like 5 hrs and lost sleep because I like it, didn't expect these comments though... HAHHAHAH it was fun I was speechless at some parts and Yes I agree to the comments where I wanted to punch the ML but in the end it was decent... I'll state my the pros and cons though...
First of all this story has a lot of plot holes; starting wiwth accepting the sister right of bat and how the duke didn't killed her parents. Wath happened to the parents?
What was the storyvof the fl mother? What about her blood? Her Identity as an elf?
And yes maybe the ML was an asshole but considering he's been 10 years at war, he lacks knowledge of what is love... though i still hate him ahhahahhahah
The 2nd leads, the older sister got pregnant for what? Like considering the fan service of involving heat... it's still not acceptable that she got pregnant and got married without involving her solving the problem... Though thank you sa kids!!!
Hahahahahhahahahha also I loved how the FL become adaptable as a noble lady where she became smarter on how to respond lady like.
It's sad how the story feels rushed and cut some story line that's why I believe it has a lot of plot holes. But so far I love it(▰˘◡˘▰)
10/10 My gallery is full of our FL pretty faces HAHAHAHAHAH
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Damn all I could say is that I love it! I debated myself all night along with my prediction and damn the plot where Mondae's(original) past was finally mentioned, I debated myself with possibilities that everything will be fine and thank god, the issue resolved on its own.
Also for highlights our MC really is SMART! like when he was given an option to choose over money vs a new member, he casually chose an option where He will not be bashed
for it, like he went for the ranking instead of picking the member himself!! Also It was sad that the two members of the October 31 team didn't get to debut, but showed sportsmanship is what I really like.
This story is amazing I was excited/happy while reading this. I really like the way our main character handled everything. This is my go to! Anyway waiting for more chapters! However there's this one thing I want to know, and that is after the debut quest, what was the next quest of the system?
Okay so the plot was amazing and i like the story however i saw the side story and it was so funny and for me yeah we were not expecting that kind of thing and i was just like next episode i was about to drop it but then i saw the comment section of those part and it was so funny that i was like tend to read another chapters i don't know i dropped it all after three panels of the side story i just don't like it anyway i recommend the main story but the side story not so so i was really disappointed ╮( ̄▽ ̄)╭(⌒▽⌒)











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