Like I get that it's grounding but rlly bruh, right after u just said ml might die and they have a thing going on clearly
That wasnt a kiss my boy was suffocating he needed air
The start of this was so good and interesting but now it's so messy. Too many things happening in too little time. I do rlly like garnet and amethysts storyline but the pacing of this whole story is getting super rushed. Idk I really had high hopes for this esp cos it's so unique
I think they spent too long on the filler episodes of the broadcast gem storyline, so bringing the story back to the true plot feels sloppy. For example, they should’ve gone into the orthera storyline, moon owl background as a manufactured scapegoat and the cruelty of the imperial family when moon own first brought up the mermaid story at the dinner table. Also, gradual moments of showing how the imperial family controlled media and what the people believed to be truth should’ve been foreshadowed more throughout the story.
If they had focused on JUST the loeri/ moon owl and Marianne/ the very shady death of vyseris it would’ve made more sense with the overall plot of the imperial family. The egg story is CRAZY tho
I think they spent too long on the filler episodes of the broadcast gem storyline, so bringing the story back to the true plot feels sloppy. For example, they should’ve gone into the orthera storyline/ moon owl background as a manufactured scapegoat and the cruelty of the imperial family when obsidian first brought up the mermaid story at the dinner table. Also, gradual moments of showing how the imperial family controlled the media and what the people believed to be truth should’ve been foreshadowed more throughout the story.
If they had focused on JUST the loeri/ moon owl and Marianne/ the very shady death of vyseris it would’ve made more sense with the overall plot of the imperial family. The egg story is CRAZY tho
I also dunno what they're going for with the egg but they've repeatedly hinted at mermaids and ortera throughout the story, so maybe the egg is important for later.
I actually feel rlly emotional. This was one of the first things I read as a kid that I actually rlly rlly liked and that actually got me hooked on binging chapters!! So crazy to see a remake in my lifetime lmao this is gonna be great!! im gonna unsubscribe and come back when there's like at least 35 new chapters to binge
Don't be like me and read until 5am under the assumption that the side couple gets further explored, cause they don't
i was hoping i’d see more about them but there was nothing </3
Although we were robbed of teddy bear mc, the whole "hes a fairy looking guy so don't fall in love" thing being explained to everyone is too good
Recs where "love endures everything" with a healthy dose of angst and more importantly loads of bingable chapters pls
But I stayed reading bc of how real the characters were. Each had their own story and the way they supported one another when things got tough really fed my soul. omg I can't believe it's wrapping up now
Was rlly good at the start. Rlly liked how it was going I only wish it was more plot driven later on. Author majorly fumbled the time skip and ending??? Who was their editor like So many questions like what happened with blondie in the past and why was he hated by red head girl to call him a business man thru and thru? Also I thought maybe him and the ginger maid girl would develop smth with the whole garden scene? Also the black curly haired girl and guy had a thing (he seemed to like her)?? I feel like nothing got developed and it suddenly just wrapped up and ended. The author added sm side characters without even developing their stories?? Plus as soon as fl left the manor her whole relationship with her husband was just forgotten like excuse me the girl was in a whole abusive relationship and it never even got mentioned? I wanted to see some real ass revenge but I feel robbed of my time and hope of a good ending
Like I need a whole story focused on him with a happy ever after cos he's not caught a break since forever it seems. The illegitimate forgotten kid, then groomed by his stepmum who used him as a replacement for his dad and everyone knew, the whole revolt, and now his horrible abusive wife