I couldnt read through the second story at all, I kept skipping it
I think my main problem with it is that it doesnt feel like a love story at all, but more like an adult taking an abused kid under his wing
In a weirdly toxic way- sexual and all
I mean, i can tell that this author likes the whold "you're the only one who can understand me" idea, but in the case of the teacher/student thing. Urgh, idk, it felt too much like the tutor was the bad guy
The ex you dont wanna think about.
I get from a literary point of view, the sunbae is supposed to personify Jiho's insecurities and all
But shouldnt authors make sure their villains have more to their personalities? If theres NOTHING loveable about a person, dont put him in the story please please
Ill just imagine hes failing all his classes, his life is trash and the reason why hes obsessed with a high school boy is because he cant remember a time where he was happy apart from when they were together
There you go, a background, i can breathe better now









Holy shit i have goosebumps