
This started really good, but I felt it got kind of weird and unfocused as it went on. A lot of moments were it felt like characters needed to talk out their feelings they just went straight to banging. Makoto lost a lot of agency as a character, by the end he was just following whatever Shiro wanted. I normally like netorare stuff, but it felt out of place here. It was still really hot on its own, but not maybe not fitting for this story, especially for Makoto it felt super out of character for him to be okay with the telephone scene.
Sorry if it feels like I'm shitting on the story. I really like a lot about it, and I think this author is very promising (I really hope the rest of her omegaverse story gets translated) I just wanted to get my thoughts out. Thank you if you read it, and thank you to the scanlators for all their work.

I'm always shocked by people who read manga and expect it to be something completely different. We're 17 chapters in now, the tone has been set from the beginning, and it's clear that this won't have a very happy or satisfying ending. This isn't a story about happiness or positivity, and that's kind of the point.
I honestly love how bitchy Chowon is, something about the way he's written feels somehow realistic, and the strong attitude is very refreshing. Him and Heesoo are my favorites.
YES i agree I WANTED TOO COMMENT SMT BOUT DIS BUT IK PPL WOULD BE UP MY ASS BOUT IT
I honestly agree. He is too bitchy but that gives story a nice spice up. But well if it were me I wouldn't have gone after such a guy. Am honestly tired of girls taking things like everything should be up to them and Chowon, not at all sorry to say, is such a guy. Such ppl many times forget about how much pain they make their partner go through. But to be frank looking at the bigger picture he is not much different from Hyesung of before. Except Hyesung wasn't obsessed. I can't see why ppl hate Chowon so much but love Hyesung. Wasn't he the same sort of pain in ass in the start? Making everything about himself. Though I do exclude the part where Chowon tried to get someone sexually assaulted but that can be included in his obsession. So overall he is only worse that Hyesung since he is "obsessed". So maybe we can expect a better side of him in the future chapters like with Hyesung.