I honestly love how bitchy Chowon is, something about the way he's written feels somehow realistic, and the strong attitude is very refreshing. Him and Heesoo are my favorites.
I honestly agree. He is too bitchy but that gives story a nice spice up. But well if it were me I wouldn't have gone after such a guy. Am honestly tired of girls taking things like everything should be up to them and Chowon, not at all sorry to say, is such a guy. Such ppl many times forget about how much pain they make their partner go through. But to be frank looking at the bigger picture he is not much different from Hyesung of before. Except Hyesung wasn't obsessed. I can't see why ppl hate Chowon so much but love Hyesung. Wasn't he the same sort of pain in ass in the start? Making everything about himself. Though I do exclude the part where Chowon tried to get someone sexually assaulted but that can be included in his obsession. So overall he is only worse that Hyesung since he is "obsessed". So maybe we can expect a better side of him in the future chapters like with Hyesung.
This started really good, but I felt it got kind of weird and unfocused as it went on. A lot of moments were it felt like characters needed to talk out their feelings they just went straight to banging. Makoto lost a lot of agency as a character, by the end he was just following whatever Shiro wanted. I normally like netorare stuff, but it felt out of place here. It was still really hot on its own, but not maybe not fitting for this story, especially for Makoto it felt super out of character for him to be okay with the telephone scene.
Sorry if it feels like I'm shitting on the story. I really like a lot about it, and I think this author is very promising (I really hope the rest of her omegaverse story gets translated) I just wanted to get my thoughts out. Thank you if you read it, and thank you to the scanlators for all their work.











Has it been stated which one of them is older? (I'm a filthy speedreader and I skip most of the boring dialogue, sorry).
I think it may be the black haired guy (I'm terrible with names) but I'm not sure. I've been trying to find that out, but I haven't found a clear answer.
If it's really him I might drop this tbh. I'm tired of all the older ukes that both look and act way younger than the semes, and meanwhile the semes look and act like they're near 30 but are meant to 22 or something. It really takes me out of the moment. It's kinda hard to believe he's older when if everything about him suggests he's an innocent teenager.
Omg I can relate to this so much!
Glad I'm not the only one, whenever I comment about it I get a lot of shit. Of course, I don't mind which one of them is older, but their ages should be at least somewhat believable. I noticed a recent increase in this trend recently, especially on korean comics for whatever reason, can't say I'm a fan.
It just getting annoying to me honestly.
I dont know if its some sort of thing now a days where the bottom is older.
But I dont always have an issue but if thats what I'm only finding it gets annoying.
And as someone who would never be with someone who is younger. I would like to be able to enjoy reading some older top. And like you've mentioned these bottoms be looking like 20 year olds and the tops like 25 year olds to find out they reversed.
I'm glad I'm not the only one feeling this way!
And like you said it should at least be believable because it makes the story a bit more realistic
What's wrong with being with someone younger? Last guy I was with was 14 years younger than me. ╮( ̄▽ ̄)╭
Like I said, I don't mind which one is younger, and I'm not talking about real life realtionships. I'm just bothered when, in fiction, neither of them act or even look like their age - the supposedly older uke feels more like an innocent teenager, and the seme feels like he should be pushing 30, in both appearance and behaviour, heck even his job position, but it turns out he's barely early twenties. I know there are tons of other things to pick appart about the story that could also be called unrealistic, but this one in particular bothers me. I've noticed it a lot lately (particularly on korean comics for some reason), if I've only seen it once or twice I wouldn't mind, but since it's so common it gets tiring.
Job position is a one that I've noticed.
Like I'm Ks secret the bottom was 30 and the top was 28 but the top was in a higher ranked position?
Like my reasons may be a bit different from yours but overall I really agree with you.
Its none of my business who gets with who.
But that's not my cup of tea.
Not that I would shame people for being with someone younger but its not something I would personally do.
Like if you enjoyed being with the dude that's a good thing.
I rather see a person happy regardless of age.
But again I personally just wouldn't feel comfortable doing that