Madam_Meh's Topics (33)

The chapters are short. They don't really stay on any point long enough. It seems like because of the 7 year time skip we missed a lot of storylines that could have been explored. Not only that if they wanted to do a time skip I would want them to do it in a more interesting manner like after coming to the world and getting used to it the readers are used to the plot but then a bad accident happens that leaves the reader on a cliffhanger till the next chapter then we see that she ends up waking after after a few years, all her plans ruined and she has to build up from the ground up. Or in this context you could go the normal route and just let 7 boring years pass with small events that don't really matter not skip through all the plot points and just shove them at our face. Also the ML(?) was just shoved at our faces with no time to process. So yea that my review so far after chap 11. If you like really fast paced stories where they just skip to the important bits then this is for you but if not don't read.

Nooooo, Sir sera he doesn't mean it that wayyy.
Also Rip the guy also rip that shirt.

What the fuck? I haven't felt this frustrated since bunny drop.
What the fuck is wrong with thier parents.

Shipping her with anyone in this book feels so wrong I mean, she basically sees them all as her children so it makes me uncomfortable.

Also, seeing the back story made me cry.
love this comic, 9/10. again except for the fact it feels like we shouldn't be shipping any of them. if she does have to end up with someone it should be Nora. He's not related to her, he doesn't have thought of manipulating her for his self interest, and again they AREN'T related. Don't give me the but its not through blood- stfu.

That fucking bitch. Just because he's a rope bunny/sub doesn't mean you can push him into your abusive sadistic tendencies. Its consent that makes BDSM. Not what ever that shit was. He was a fucking minor but he brought his friends and probably rape gang banged him. Piece of shit.
Also for the sister, even though I'm pissed as hell I can understand her reaction. She's a vanilla that was introduced though the internet. Everything she searched up didn't actually actually represent what BDSM was. And she only saw the bad sides. Of course if your brother comes home after days with a beaten look after you find out he's into BDSM, something that was apparently disgusting according to the internet. You would react that way, "He looks beaten and bruised but to think he enjoyed that??? What hell???" Is what the sister is probably thinking.
She was introduced to it poorly which makes sense for her reaction but what pisses me of is that he came home after being missing for days and the first thing she thinks is that he's disgusting. Not that he got jumped or that he was almost beat to death or that he was kidnapped. She didn't even try to reason with him or talk it out instead she jumped to conclusions.
And because he was just mentally abused for days and gang bang raped. He wouldn't have the strength to fight back.
GOD THIS IS WHY CONSENT AND TALKING THINGS THOUGH IS NEEDEDDDD.
Also still pissed that the pink haired girl still hasn't formally talked to him about their relationship even though they done a few plays already and because he probably doesn't know how to properly talk about this kinda thing, its on the girl to teach him these things properly.
I just hope that they don't skip over it and just make them in a relationship without addressing what she did.

Overall though, I really like this so far. They're addressing these topics and I think thats important to address in the BDSM community. Just as long as they fix what I said with the girl, I'll be happy. And maybe talk to the sister.

I don't think it really matters to Ein anymore. You know why? Because Ein isn't worried anymore and when the babys born he'll be disappointed if the kid doesn't act like his mother or look like his mother but he won't be worried anymore. Once he gets a sibling he will know that even if his mother looks after the baby that she will still take time for him, after all it's Roselia.
A good mother's love knows no bounds for their children.

I mean I get it. Poisoning a child is terrible but its survival in their world. I mean I'm only a few years younger but I understand that??? Is she trying to get her son killed?!?!?

The chapters are short. They don't really stay on any point long enough. It seems like because of the 7 year time skip we missed a lot of storylines that could have been explored. Not only that if they wanted to do a time skip I would want them to do it in a more interesting manner like after coming to the world and getting used to it the readers are used to the plot but then a bad accident happens that leaves the reader on a cliffhanger till the next chapter then we see that she ends up waking after after a few years, all her plans ruined and she has to build up from the ground up. Or in this context you could go the normal route and just let 7 boring years pass with small events that don't really matter not skip through all the plot points and just shove them at our face. Also the ML(?) was just shoved at our faces with no time to process. So yea that my review so far after chap 11. If you like really fast paced stories where they just skip to the important bits then this is for you but if not don't read.

GOD DAMN IT, SAY IT THEN. ASK JIM WHY HE'S ANGRY. MAKE HIM TALK.
mother fucker- even if it doesn't work at least you tried don't just walk out- motherfuckifneoskcjfieori

This was something I've wanted in a transmission novel for a long time. Not for main character just to go through the story and say" oh I just need to avoid the red flags or I just need to be nice so I won't die!" Then for everyone to love her and it be super easy. Especially in villainess storys, it always seems like the guys end up falling in love with the MC even though they were supposed to hate her. I also hated the fact that the MC's never thought, "shit, I'm not supposed to be the one hearing these apologies it should have been the previous owner of this body" so this was a really nice change of pace also the fact that the ML's are actually being held accountable for what they did. Not, " oh I haven't done that yet so I'm not the bad guy here. "
So I hope this story keeps this up!