Zero common sense, many cute moments. It was meh* overall. I'd give this one higher if they just ended up being a thruple. 6/10.
This is fiction. Fictions is a way for us to safely explore certain things or just our fantasy. I love dark fiction but that doesn't mean i like that in real life. If you cannot separate fiction from reality, then step back and think about it. Don't yuck on someone's yum. If you don't like what someone likes in their fiction, then just move on.
FL is giving the most fake shoujo responses ever while having the characteristics of a white wallpaper. She makes everything a problem, cries when the toilet door doesn't open in her own house for fuc sake... I just can't. ML's personality is: *show up topless* *scream* * save the situation that doesn't need to be saved* *make FL blush* BLEGH.
I normally enjoy age-gap stories but in this one FL acts like a whining toddler while ML is a working adult. They don't fit.
Dropped after chapter 3.
I thought I'd absolutely love this one but the storytelling is too straightforward. Since it is constructed very simply, the experience feels like I'm chewing a drywall. FL is too OP, the fight scenes don't give any anticipation. There are no real stakes. The mysteries are explained so quickly that it's funny. FL doesn't have to work hard to achieve anything and she has hardly have any personality other than being pure blood. The art is unbalanced too. Sometimes it feels very realistic but ML's head proportions are a mess, his face looks way bigger with that small calvaria. Looks fine in some angles but when the artist draws him from the front, he looks funny.
Anyway, extremely overrated.
Losing respect for this story is crazy. There’s a bunch of stories with OP male leads all the time and I don’t see ppl complaining. All of a sudden its a problem when it’s a female and it’s a bit more fast pace I get that we all have our own taste, but I feel like this criticism is very harsh.
Also, you read a bunch of yaois with crazy body proportions, criticizing this art is crazy to me. And this is no hate to yaoi reader since I read it too. But the favoritism goes crazy. Not to forget about the repetitive storylines within yaois, but you’re talking about how this is overrated.
Yeah I disagree with the person stating
"There’s a bunch of stories with OP male leads all the time and I don’t see ppl complaining. All of a sudden its a problem when it’s a female "
Like there are so many ppl complaining about how OP male leads are boring, Im one of those, but I dont casually voiced out my opinions
Yeah, same with me, if they clicked on the "already read" section on my page, they could see I rarely give 5 stars to anything and make pretty harsh reviews to ANY genre.
I suppose they wanted to attack somebody aimlessly. Embarrassing.
Honestly, I wouldnt tell anyone to not love something if they are already enjoying it. ╮( ̄▽ ̄)╭
You should really try to reevaluate your opinions of course all opinions are valid but you be giving toxic ass yaois with RAPE 5 stars, while giving almost every other story just 1 star??? Make it sense please ?? Just because some stories are popular and overhyped according to you does not mean they are automatically worth one star while the most fucked up and deranged stories have 5 stars?










In the last chapter I was like: HELL YEAH BROTHER! I was waiting for that.
Thank you author. Adding that dream was a right decision.