23 chapters in and there’s no plot. This reads like a guide book for a video game more than anything.
I’m not getting the vibe that this is a harem. The saint isn’t into him in that way and I don’t think the beast girl will become a traveling companion, but if it does turn out to be a harem I think it’ll be something like Rosario-Vampire or Ranma 1/2.
2nd ml lost and confused and it’s not even really delusion on his part. Besides the confession about switching majors, why would you ask your straight best friend to play your love interest in the school play???
Sometimes you have to acknowledge your limits. It’s ok to be there for your friends when they need you, but going out of your way and taking on their problems as your own never ends well. She tried her hardest to help her friend and not only did she lose said friend but she also lost her career and passion for writing.
Vinny is going to realize in real time the power of friendship and teamwork!
Now see I never liked her and now I know I never will. She did not need to slap her. Especially since I feel like in the end she used those edits to get to where she is now. I just wish they all would move along and stop trying to interfere with her life.
There are too many points that aren’t connecting properly in this story. The bully girl’s older brother and his illegal boxing, the antagonist who reminds me of the girl from Pyramid Game and her weird grandfather who’s built their school, and now we have the drivers son and the princess. There are too many plot leads that just aren’t leading anywhere.
When Anita was winning no one was there to stop her from killing innocent people, but now that she’s losing people are supposed to take in her back story and consider what happened to her? And it’s not even just Anita that’s supposed to be forgiven but also the king that killed her people and stole her power? Author has lost their mind.
The way I was finally about to start reading this and now the comments are full of incest talk…….I’ll be back at a later date. (⊙…⊙ )
“To lighten the load” was so sinister
Chemistry so trash that no one took their interactions seriously.
Confession - X
Fake dating - XX
Meeting the parents - XXX