
I feel as though there isn’t an established plot to even understand where this story is going. Yeah she wants to basically raise Ain to become a good person so he doesn’t end up as a villain like in the novel but it seems that’s all we get??? Like what even was the plot of the original novel, knowing it would give us as readers a better understanding of major plot points that are going to happen in the future. But it seems that all we have is Ain is gonna be bad like... We don’t even know what happens to him and his father at the end of the novel, if they get defeated, who the protagonist is that might cause trouble and so on. It just feels like there’s a lot of plot holes and so the story lacks substance.
The writing of characters is local off because it literally doesn’t make sense for the seme to just be calm when he’s lover almost got severely injured, like why is it only his brother reacts in an understandable way? Like this kind of stuff happens a lot in this webtoon where characters are just too complacent at times when it doesn’t even make sense just to push the plot in the way that the author wants. Even the MC, except for him trying to stop the blonde haired one from touching the ML, that is literally the only situation in this story when he’s been proactive. He just kind of flounds around and gets pushed around by everyone else, to the point he even lets himself get sexually harassed but he doesn’t even have a reaction to that either and it just doesn’t make sense. I just wished the characters would act in a way that was more satisfying and made sense.
seriously everyone in this manhwa is frustrating asf I ain't ever forgetting the little bro masturbated on top of a sleeping woojin before that was totally sexual harassment and everyone seemed to didn't care about it