daddyrie April 10, 2021 1:37 pm

The writing of characters is local off because it literally doesn’t make sense for the seme to just be calm when he’s lover almost got severely injured, like why is it only his brother reacts in an understandable way? Like this kind of stuff happens a lot in this webtoon where characters are just too complacent at times when it doesn’t even make sense just to push the plot in the way that the author wants. Even the MC, except for him trying to stop the blonde haired one from touching the ML, that is literally the only situation in this story when he’s been proactive. He just kind of flounds around and gets pushed around by everyone else, to the point he even lets himself get sexually harassed but he doesn’t even have a reaction to that either and it just doesn’t make sense. I just wished the characters would act in a way that was more satisfying and made sense.

    Rika April 10, 2021 7:02 pm

    seriously everyone in this manhwa is frustrating asf I ain't ever forgetting the little bro masturbated on top of a sleeping woojin before that was totally sexual harassment and everyone seemed to didn't care about it

daddyrie April 8, 2021 11:42 am

I think this story is cute but I wish the MC had more of an actual personality, it’s like even though she’s the MC we don’t even know who she is really

daddyrie April 8, 2021 1:40 am

I actually feel like I’m the only one who hates Dion He’s just so vile, i hate characters like him

daddyrie February 8, 2021 11:16 pm

Kinda glad chiwoo lost his virginity to the merman, the merman was fine as hell

    RatatEmma February 9, 2021 1:40 am

    Yeah idk why I liked it so much-

    queereigisa February 12, 2021 10:54 am

    and now you're making me wanting to reread this from the start lmfao

daddyrie February 8, 2021 11:13 pm

The merman and the green haired guy were so hot, I want them back

daddyrie February 7, 2021 6:28 pm

finally read a romance webtoon with an ML who has personality instead of some boring brooding overly possessive guy

    Ace February 7, 2021 11:40 pm

    hes more than that! He has tacky wigs~~~ sexyyy

    melrodi February 8, 2021 8:30 am
    hes more than that! He has tacky wigs~~~ sexyyy Ace

    Any man that wears a wig purely out of entertainment and gives you desserts on the daily is a keeper

daddyrie February 7, 2021 4:32 pm

Felt the two sisters becoming close was rushed like it literally took 1 chapter for them to accept each other

daddyrie February 7, 2021 4:10 pm

Honestly this feels like this has been written by a 14 year old, it has the same cringy vibe as fan fiction written by teenagers

    NaikOwO February 7, 2021 9:00 pm

    hmm maybe?this manhwa does have alot of flaws and goes ups and downs to the point i dont know how my emotions are working rn lol the art is really sweet tho:(

daddyrie January 2, 2021 1:42 pm

am i the only one who doesn’t like Joseph the knight, he just seems so bland and lacking personality. i hope she ends up with someone else

    Dema January 2, 2021 10:09 pm

    I can see ur point but I think hes cute. Maybe if he had more scenes he'd b less bland

    daddyrie February 7, 2021 5:10 pm
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    being a knight shouldn’t stop him from having a personality though, all he is is nice

daddyrie May 22, 2020 9:07 am

I feel as though there isn’t an established plot to even understand where this story is going. Yeah she wants to basically raise Ain to become a good person so he doesn’t end up as a villain like in the novel but it seems that’s all we get??? Like what even was the plot of the original novel, knowing it would give us as readers a better understanding of major plot points that are going to happen in the future. But it seems that all we have is Ain is gonna be bad like... We don’t even know what happens to him and his father at the end of the novel, if they get defeated, who the protagonist is that might cause trouble and so on. It just feels like there’s a lot of plot holes and so the story lacks substance.

    Sooyona May 23, 2020 11:51 am

    You will know these things in the next 6 chapters and see the OML and the OFL.

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