oh maaan... really it started off so good, the story couldve fleshed out a bit more and i think there are other ways to execute the ending better even if this is just a short story. The development is a solid 10/10 but the ending pulls it down to a 6.
im rereading this again and i just want to say I REALLY MISS REDHEAD MASK GUY AND CONSTRUCTION GUY FROM CHAPTER 10 pls tell me they will appear on the latter chapters cuz man
i dont think anyone could top Shizuma as the best boyfriend/lover ever
Sorry I read this part so slow "i dont think anyone could top Shizuma" haha that it took me things to consider myself ╮( ̄▽ ̄)╭...
If anyone could ever "top" Shizuma it would be Minato and Minato alone lol
Exactly (๑•ㅂ•)و✧...and definitely support the switch ⁄(⁄ ⁄·⁄ω⁄·⁄ ⁄)⁄