Any bl with elegant and smart uke?

15 04,2024

It's cute but it lacks a proper storyline. Kinda boring..

It could've been more fun if this misunderstanding thing went on for a couple of more chapters. But ok i'll take it..underwhelming but I'll take it.

The story had potential. It started off really bad, it was going quite well untill chapter 30 then all went downhill, it became extremely rushed and confusing. It's your average r@pe yaoi story we get from horny fujo female writers. It's horrible overall.

I know the spoilers and Not even God can make me forgive this @lpha. Idc he is redeeming it's his second life, oops too late for that. Put that bullet in your head this time.

This is messy and Chaotic I live!!!
Also this time I am actually caring for the Al*h@.

I want this to be more messy! It's not even that messy. I want pain, angst, almost death, split up, ect ect!!

Dan needed this. His bubble must be popped.