
Its good but the progress is so slow the fl's determination can break in a slightly touch,, if I were to lose so may important things,, I'll strive harder instead cowering in fear and full of hesitation

Ah but also keep in mind she has been put into a new world and position that she knows almost nothing about. That and people render situations differently, I think she is definitely the person to have determination but I think she is just having a hard time knowing what type of power she has and the type of life she can live in a world she doesn’t belong in nor want to be a part of.
why did she have to drag him in her problems can't she mind her own business,, it's not like she know his true power to entrust him responsibilities
hey, we the readers can finally ship him with someone that's worthy instead of a little red head girl who was honestly way too young, lol
but you see the issue is that most of the readers here were good with the mc being a lone wolf..so if a fl is added here now..i think the mc will become a little tender? or not so vicious i guess? the point is that it just feels so ooc for him to have a romantic interest