The idea for the story was honestly good but pacing isn't great. I like slowburn but here it feels like plot is stuck in place
agreed. the fragmentation of each scene just isnt working. its an interesting idea but in execution nothing makes sense
Not ash tricking our innocent baby into some freaky bdsm roleplay (keep it up)
Real bad tricked him
That bandaid ain't gonna hold any of that bae
Real ones know it'll slip off since it's damp
I hope we will get to see that baby bump and not timeskip over it hahsjdk
I hate it that the two of the remind me of kim dan and jaekyung, in appearance I mean
I'M DYING HELP that's so true, even the age gap (•ˋ _ ˊ•)
There goes my dream about Keith screwing Della up, escaping and living his best single life
He screwed him once i highly doubt he wanna do that again
This needs to end with the three of them passing mc around like blunt istg
Truer words have never been spoken istg
LMAOO
Only two acceptable options here:
1. Tell Taeha to fuck off (not very polite)
2. Let him in and go for a 3some (very polite )
Definitely 2, it’s very polite for them both to fuck him