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Isn’t he new shadow on the demon kings side? If I recall that guy that helped him was fishy

To get the ML’s attention, threaten his sweet little sister. R.i.p dumbasses

Get revenge by killing the empress and her father we won’t blame them right? That b**** is guilty as f idc if she’s scared of her daddy her greed will destroy her

when your crush mistaken your identity and unconsciously ask you to help them avoid to you...

What if the combined the poisons he took becomes an antidote to his illness...

maybe he's infertile or has low sperm, count even so it's been proven that they are the father of children they didn't think was possible to have. Some ppl are super fertile and compatible.

The nerve she's only ever been with him. I know the medicine gives phantom pregnancy symptoms, his parents are so cruel to her. If she ever really does get pregnant I hope he trust her more.

She just wants to be loved and protected by her dense asshole of a husband. He's not evil or intentionally cruel, his insecurities are vast. He needs to pull his head out of his ass and get over the difference in their status and upbringing to see reality.

His people and family don't treat her like royalty at all. Her own family doesn't care for her, all she has is him but she barely has that. She's been alone in a battlefield different from the one he is familiar with.

Her dad is hawt/sexy but all you ladies signing up to be step mommy are too brave for me. Do you not see how menacing he is... his glare can literally freeze people in their tracks and make them tremble... I chose to admire from a far safe distance

She probably should have joined her fiancé club... she might end up with the most members in history. She can’t reject applications... he warned don’t regret it

I love the graphics at the end of the latest chapter, thank you for the update!

The story itself is fascinating, it seems to have a lot of elements; Bird clan versus Snake clan... Thousand year war. Enemies from two clans had a forbidden love causing them to suffered tragedy, leaving a child behind, one whose abilities had to be sealed and hidden amongst humans. One whose destiny can very well possibly bring peace to both clans. How all fates are intertwined, the falcon boy who’s branded as a sinner for trying to save his father. His father the last to see the girl’s father alive. Her father’s blood has healing abilities, it turned the falcon boy into the key to her full awakening, supposedly turned her mother into an immortal but possibly gave up his immortality in the process. She’s held captive and experimented on by the bird clan. Snake clan on the verge of extinction thanks to the birds clans cruelty, using them as food to mystical pets, slaves and playthings thanks to their beauty. Corruption in the bird clan seem to run deep.

I’m thankful someone tried updating this.It made the concept/core of the story understood to a certain degree.
Thank you!


Unfortunately since English doesn’t appear to be their first language or something they know very well it made it difficult/painful for some readers to enjoy or fully understand

Sometimes it’s difficult to find synonyms/equivalent words/meanings when converting words. Especially if it’s new to you.

There’s so many ways to say the same thing/combine words. Sadly the order of words and words chosen change the impression it gives off entirely

Ex: (in the beginning of chapter 5 it says) Excuse Us have an important guest to visit!

You would think the people walking in said those word themselves and not the establishment itself

If something like Excuse US, an important guest is visiting or has come to visit/Make Way suddenly an important guest has arrived

The scene would feel differently and both the people and security reactions would have a bigger impact.

Ex: (Ch 9 page 4) Once upon building Lei Feng Tower... That found out a stone weighing 750 tons...

Upon building Lei Feng Tower... They found a stone weighing 750 tons or While building Lei Feng Tower... They discovered a stone weighing 750 tons

The order/structure or words can be really annoying, writing is both a beauty and pain.

Giving the perspective, thoughts and intentions of characters/sceneries the way it’s intended isn’t easy.

It’s like making a meal, with or without a recipe, ingredients, they way they are prepared, cooked and presented are important for full enjoyment.

It’s like being hungry and finding a delicious meal but while eating it, accidentally biting into multiple lemon seeds. You’re left with a bitter aftertaste and reluctance to continue eating it in spite of how good it is.

That’s readers while reading a good/possibly amazing story with confusing translations.