
The story is veeeery veeeeery beautiful. It's rare for a bl manga to cover a couples old age story or how they come up after the sweet and lovey-dovey phase of youth, and the freedom and hay day of adulthood. Sometimes, having future is also the best and greatest part of one's life. I LOVE IT! I WISH I CAN GIVE 10 STARS HAHAHAHAHA
THANKS FOR MAKING ME CRY HAHAHAHA

The plot was so great. Everything were narrated in novel-like manner, I love how the author wrote it using the proper words to convey the character's feelings. Especially Ed, he was so human, so realistic. Everything is realistic. I even cried at the end. Honestly, it's rare for me to cry in bl manga/manhwa bcos they usual has more romance, smut, innocence, sweetness, or even aggressiveness on them. But this one is extremely new to me, they might have used smut a lot, but it was necessary as it was part of the plot. They put the right amount of everything. As well as using "words" for monologue, more clear speeches less vagueness, made each characters action reasonable and transparent enough for readers to understand them without any explanation. Then poof! They made a realistic plot.
And I agree when the people commented about the top three greatest lightsabers hahahaha
Alex, Director Kang and McQueen.

The second story is just great (for me), I like the twist hahahaha. I was about to pity Yuuma not until the twist hahahaha. Still great tho. Btw, first story has similar twist with another manga. Yet, this one has better reasons (as how the supposed human version of Chibita knew about Kei's routines with his dog).
It could have been better if the lines were not as vague as it is. Sometimes, it's wise to make it short and direct than making it too dramatic causing it to be too long and (well) vague. Thus, failure to convey the right emotion to the reader. But, the plot is good.